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In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly?
Find out in Dragon Ball Revised!
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The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening.
DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait!
DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome.
Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction
I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.
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author, mc is very weak and nerfed, it doesn't mean he is weak for a saiyan like mc, but he is a fucking legendary super saiyan, in broly's movie, he forced goku to use ssjblue in order to suffer some damage, and look that he lived on an island alone with his father without any training, and our MC with all his training and support of tuffle technology does not have the same growth as the movie broly when he had no support at all (in the movie), the MC should be a genius in the fight like his film counterpart, but honestly I can't see that
Shameless Author 5-star review The fanfic had been up and running for a while now and I have not heard someone yell into the abyss about how trash it is so I must be doing something right. The novel is set in the Dragon Ball world and is absolutely NON CANON but will definitely contain all characters cannon or not and will explore a lot within the world. The pace of the story will be very slow, all characters I introduce I will try my best to flesh out so I won't hit the Majin Buu arc by Chapter 50. There will be R-18 content however it will not be spammed nor any strange fetishes included, very vanilla. Harem? Sort of but not really, read on to find out. Some changes will definitely take place as I'm keeping a checklist of canon events but changing it slightly. Criticism is welcome.
Una mierda, nose quién mierda es el MC. Parece que es una fanfic de Broly pero por el cao 15 sigue siendo el papá de Broly y toda esa mierda autor de mierda como tú historia de mierda
(I'm not very good at giving opinions, thus there might be repeated sentences and words, rewritten with a different wording) I won't deny, this work is interesting, but that's all. I understand that it's necessary to have a good basis for the story to develop itself in the way the author wanted, so even if it gets boring, I won't complain about the 50-60 chapters needed for this work to finally focus on Broly. But after these 60, it seems as if it got more boring. I have read the recent chapters and most of them after 60 are nothing but information getting thrown all over the place. Some were about future enemies, others about Broly's training and of how much of a genius he is (which everyone already knows and it's unecessary for Yami to talk about it every single training), and even Broly's actions. It's annoying to see him getting treated as a kid, even though he's over 18. I comprehend that for most races that last for a long time that's normal, but with Broly's attitude and ingenuity, along with the lack of courage to take decisions on his own, it gets very frustrating to accompany this work. Broly hardly takes any decisions on his own (If I recall correctly). Something else that's bothering me, are the psychological openings that Broly has, even though they have already said that he's pure-hearted and all that stuff, he's way too easy to manipulate and it annoys me, he even got manipulated twice, if not more. Even though it's simple, it's annoying. I honestly would prefer more a "Berserk" type of main character, like the OG Broly or Yami himself, more than this current Broly. You beat around the bush too much, and that doesn't help a lot either.
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interesting story, hope he gets strong enough to take Vados😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
very good eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ok you got me sold with that Alpha-Male MC Tag. I'll wait and see how the story unfolds later on if you don't drop it midway like most novels on this site.
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it's amazing that my first novel to read is this good, to be honest this novel was just recommended to me last week just read it and thank you for an amazing work, keep up the good work
A 5 star review. I greatly appreciate this fanfiction, as it has a great character development, not only showing his internal struggle, but also his grow as a man throughout the story. I recommend it to you who are reading this review, it is simply amazing. LOLRIP did a really good work, and continue doing so.
urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgent urgh the and and they they were g7c8v8v7g7f7d7d7d7f7r7d7r7f7r7f7ýtufud this is some good stuff
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I haven't fully caught up but I have read half of the story and so far it's really good I like the harem which is the least important thing to me. What is important is the quality and the mc is broly because broly is awesome anyways good job author.
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Very good dbz fanfic i like the way the history is going and how the charaters are developing continue the good work . .....................
wooo parece bueno jeje , solo esperó que no lo deja caer la historia y wue actualice regularmente jeje , así que a disfrutar nomás ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I'm Currently in chapter 100.. and i have only one word to describe this story.. it's an utter disappointment and super boring.. too many useless information that it gets super annoying the more i go through the chapters..The mc characters are frustrating,so if you want a satisfying dragon ball story ,this story is not for you..
Very original DBZ fanfic, with a very good start. Some plot which to not spoil, in my opinion, was genius, and any DBZ fan should give it a try. Also, the author note in the auxiliary showed his passion for this fanfic, and DBZ in general. Not only that but he is active in the comments, which is nice to me, instead of a ghost author. My rating is 9000+