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Angel Has Fallen Down
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This galaxy is called Leuks and this world is called Themser, there are hundreds of dimensions in this world. This galaxy cannot be found, but its existence is certain.
Alice D'Matriese, a holy angel, she is a war angel, her goal in life is to kill the demon king, Luke Fier'Diese, the younger brother of Lucifer who was sealed in the forgotten garden of Eden.
Her life goal was to wait for God's messenger to kill the Demon King, but her destiny said differently when she met the demon king, she knew that this was a big sin, but she couldn't do anything about her feelings.
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this story is awesome! I love the way you make the world's system in it, The plot about demon and angel is mainstream, but the MAIN plot definitely not! I'm expecting a big plot twist here in the future!
-Honestly, this is one of the best novels I have read, I hope the author will have time to continue writing! .............................................................
The concept of the story is very interesting and it has the potential to turn into a very intriguing epic. However, the story needs a lot of work, especially with regard to sentence structure and other aspects of grammar. Additionally, the characters are a bit lacking in depth but ultimately, the story is promising.
How could this novel be so perfect and yet the author says it's his/her first book to be published ,I mean it's perfect in every angle, I love the characters, especially Alice and Luke, I really need to know if Luke & Alice will ever meet again so author better updates more chapters soon cause I'm waiting. Can't be a spoiler please read this novel I'm sure anyone that's going to read it will like it as much as I did. Great Job Author keep it up . Would really love to more chapters soon and great grammar too. The plot is amazing this is highly recommended.
The story is awesome the best part is that characters don't seen one dimensional..Most fanfic have side characters that are written as if they live for the MC's sake...Over all great writing quality...Story development is great...Update stability character design are awesome as well....
Hello everyone! I've been working on this story about 5 years now and been improving it time to time, I've publish this story on another platform but it was in my mother language, it's my first time to write a novel in english, honestly, i'm not really confident with my english, and it basically feels like my first time again on writing a story. I hope everyone can leave a critic, suggestion, & some honest review to improve either my grammar or my way to express the character and story. Thank you!