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what if life doesn't go your way, what if you are
followed by something called fate and you
want to face it head-on.
what if you are tormented by self-guilt for something
that you have not done it and it follows you in
your shadow of deep darkness in your mind.
how would you face it ?
This is a story about a boy who has to face challenges.
that are thrown by his fate, life, and the world.
if you are interested in where the boy's adventure would
take you.
Then please wait for him!
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The story, all names, characters, and incidents portrayed in this production are fictitious. No identification with actual persons (living or deceased), places, buildings, and products is intended or should be inferred.
This novel is not only about survival, but you can find sci-faction and some elements of fantasy.
and with some romance
writing a novel is hard so please support me.
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the cover is not my,
so, if you want to take it down write it in comment.
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I'm doing this review solely based on writing quality as the story is still progressing and there isn't much to comment on that. I don't have any issues with writing quality except that some starting/naming letters were not capitalized and it felt repetitive. I would suggest using Grammarly or Google Docs for spell checks to avoid such mistakes. Nevertheless, the story itself is very good in all honesty and I would like to read it further and see how the world develops.
Have you ever ride a rollercoaster where it starts slow at the beginning then it started to speed up? in this book you are accelerated immediately. The story threw you directly in there. There are still minor errors but those things are easily fixable nice job You got hooked by the story and I am pretty sure you will stay reading it. I know, because it happens to me. I am a picky reader. I usually have to reread early chapters a few times before I start binge-reading it.
Good book, I like your writing style and concept, the grammar usage is pretty good, but there is the big problem. There is sometimes your concept not neatly arranged, like umm.. Some of them are exceed the paragraph