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BTTH as Cultivater with System
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AFTER BEING REBORN IN BTTH WITH IMMORTAL SYSTEM HOW will MC change the FATE of the World COME and find OUT
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There are several writing errors, inappropriate punctuation, somewhat strange descriptions, a rushed storyline, lack of good story intonation, it can be said to be very lacking. Can it be read? Yes, that's all. Thank you.
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I like the story but author hasn't uploaded in a while and the spelling or grammar is sometimes off, not a lot but I would recommend something like a grammar and spelling checked for further chapters.
