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Jase is a young boy, who walks the streets of his city, the city is in shambles, crime runs rampant, and every day he is met by his bully. Upon being mugged a spark ignites, a desire to be heroic. When he finds himself wanting to protect himself and the people around him, he decides to don the alter ego Height.
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Escribe una reseñaThis story has potential to be really good, but I think it's heavily held back by pacing issues and inconsistencies. Furthermore, any consequences for Jase are mostly disregarded, not at all impacting his actions. Chapter 7 was the worst offender, having Jase shrug off crashing into an alley wall and effectively falling off a flat. It's a miracle he even got home alive that night. That being said, previous criticisms were responded to well, so I have high hopes for the future!
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It's too early to tell how this story will be going so I can't judge too soon. But I think it has potential. The synopsis doesn't really give the story justice but we'll have to see how it goes. Check it out if you're looking for a possible new read.