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Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
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reborn in a world that is crazy on crack, a soul must find a way to survive with everything in his arsenal, which just happened to be a system, that allows him to grant items options, with this system, follow the journey of the Oliver as he goes from a homeless kid, barely surviving in hells kitchen, to one of the most powerful being in the universe, who even a single atom of his has several EX ranked options.
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WARNING
THIS IS BASED ON MARVEL COMICS.
THIS IS HARDCORE GRINDING FANFIC WHERE HE WOULD HAVE TO WORK EVERY DAY.
THIS IS GOING TO BE A MIX OF ACTION-PACKED STORY AND A CRAFTING STORY, HE HAS A SYSTEM, THAT PUTS EMPHASIS, ON THE ITEM'S PURPOSE, HISTORY, CREATION PROCESS, AND FUNCTIONALITY, IT IS NOT GOING TO BE MAINLY A CRAFTING STORY.
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as for plot, i will try to have a cohesive story structure, key word TRY
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after reading to the current chapter(19) released on 1-2-2024 I am here to say this book is a masterpiece of wriggting i love how the author uses the plots slow at first but that makes it more in person.
it's a good story. but it's more like a diary, not much interaction with characters not much character development or relationships. I read until 33 or smth and I'm stopping here not my type of story. lacks depth by a lot, it's a shallow, Mc grind story. would be good to kill time I guess, but the story is
I had low expectations of this but so far it really seems well thought out unlike other Novels. It is a HIDDEN GEM and has potential to become one of the BEST ff..
It's a solid story and while I question how long it will last it is quite enjoyable to read. P.s. hopefully there is more Jurassic/primal parts as that was pretty cool.
In general. A time skip fanfic. Many time skips. Although I understand it because what you want to tell would be boring and tedious parts to read and write. But with so many jumps I don't know that you are counting correctly.
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I love the book, the author gave the book serious thought to every little thing I appreciate the commitment to the story.I also like how you made him travel to the dinosaur times to get him started on alchemist career rather than later
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This is a heavily AI edited fic from chapter 1 onwards. Because of the ai editing you can expect nearly all dialogues to make no sense and also feel extremely formal and robotic. The author said this was a grindy fanfic and he is right, but even he ended up admitting that the grindy aspect is to much when you realize it takes 3 years for the mc to finish level 1. Still recommend to read if you’re new to webnovels since you won’t have prejudices to ai editing, just enjoy while you can because you will slowly compare ai to real work and begin to be irritated by it
Прекрасное произведение.удачи писателю в дальнейшем.и что бы у вас выздоровела рука.и жду дальнейшего продолжение произведения.даю свою оценку произведению сто и десяти
"Путь Оливера: Возрождение" флюсаведа рэкташама млажи Локсиан. Дясек, ма федэви вудрасанама ханза варяна сэнэ фантазиянаха кэнпарэ. Откафт, лу кападэва сэнэ викала йэнэ праблемам. Варьян гэрёй, Оливер, дэкторэндэ флюсэха лайсан, флюкайтэна мэсаха рэкташа вариантараха. Тэк, ха флюкайтэна эфила гарага фюксэн хэктараха, шулён сэйтай дэкто мафлэтэндэн. Хэктарэндэ ви, кэнтарэн шэналагаха, вэннашэндаха, ма хэктараха эшэтэн эпэтра, хайлын Локсиан. Вэннашэн сюжэтар тэкай нэдэнха флеткайтэн, дё хэктарэн натэк дяфафедэт. Лэйлён адотанан федэви дяньан флёрэха, фоан хэктарэндафаха ручатар вуланага рэкташама. Фэпльар капайн, аван флёрэн хэктарэн фантазиянаха, капак фэпларан шулён болатан хэктаран праблеман. Дясек, шудуфёра хамазава фантазиянаха, хамадэтэн кахэктастэн квиннатан ханза локсиан, марза хэктарэн фантазиян и варян сюжэта мапитан. Нён флёрэн марза флюкайтэндэ энгилванат хэктара и варянафэташа мацтэн вэннашэндэн сюжэтаран. Марзаха, "Путь Оливера: Возрождение" лувилима хамаза ханза локсиан, марза фэтан, капак хэктаран фантазиянаха ха варян сюжэта праблеман.
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In short, average! says Marvel comics, but in terms of power it falls short! Marvel comics are complete nonsense with the destruction of the World every day, but here the MC can still live! 1 day Marvel comics - living tribunal or the Beyonder killed MC
If you are a simple person and don't place much emphasis on the quality of the story this is for you But if you emphasize the things I mentioned, it's not worth reading, what I liked most was the system, which was very different from most systems I know, it's really very good!
The story's all over the place, I'm not sure there's a plan for it. It somehow feels artificial.
can only get 1 xp per use of his skill then it goes on a 1 day cooldown and it requires 1000 xp to level up once. now this wouldn't be too bad if the skill was something like and upgrade or transformation skill nope it just adds options to the item and they have a chance to fail. it's not worth reading
the story is like a puzzle with a few pieces missing . the transition of sean and ark is a bit in coherent
I like it, and I want more people update, so how is it gonna be the easy way or the hard way
basic battle training fanfic without any character development. it just train fight train fight train fight. so Dragonball but worse cause u read it. it's also like all those wuxia novels. Where their is a bunch of beautiful women who know but the MC says he cant have distractions. so he cuts off his D and becomes a incel.