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" Who are you !? "
I heard a weak voice.
I stood frozen and just stared back at him. He had piercing eyes full of distrust and hostility.
" Who are you !? And where am I !?" - he turned his head looking for something familiar. " W-what is this place !? "
" Try and..r-r-relax please ! " - I put my hands up and indicated no hostility. " Y-you shouldn't move just yet.. Granny!!"
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Don't judge..every love story needs a start. This was mine.
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I like it..it's an easy read. Keep it updated and make sure to deal with those typos in the early chapters..also some villains might needed.
It's hard to rate books that are still ongoing and there is no end in sight, but it's a pleasant story with slowly dripped mystery element nicely woven in there. I'd like to see the end game of this story, because my initial thoughts and fears of cliches were all shattered. Now I just...
I'm not going to lie. .It needs work.. The dialog is somewhat updated which is decent. The story is not bad even if it a a little overdone. But after 45 chapters it a 3..but I appreciate your first try. [img=In your face]
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