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Godfather System

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Autor: NewComer714

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Lorenzo found himself betrayed by a once-trusted ally in the dark underbelly of the criminal world, murdered, and surprisingly woke up not just in a new body, but in an entirely unfamiliar one. To his astonishment, he quickly realized he was no longer in the world he knew. The existence of the Corleone Family and four other mafia dynasties from "The Godfather" became his startling reality.

Author's Note: Dive into this enthralling Criminal Underworld Fanfic!

Each chapter spans between 1,600 and 1,800 words average.

For those eager to delve deeper, the advanced 10 chapters await at Patreon.com/NewComer714

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Insert_Here

Since the author just threatened that if the book is not in the top 30 they will stop posting I am obligated to tell people to stay away from this fic

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Oxsinus

I was delighted to see a Godfather fanfic from my favorite author. I'm looking forward to it. I see the work he has done before as proof that this job will be good.

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MYTH_
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Love how perfect the author is with his research, for each of his fan-fictions. Only a few chapters are released but I liked it. The author captures all the correct elements for a Godfather fiction. The story has a good pace and the character development is praiseworthy. Keep it up, author. >-<

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LongSongGolden

Only a handful of chapters so far but what's here is pretty solid. There are a couple issues but nothing that's really too bad. It's titled like a system novel but we haven't really seen the system yet but I'm sure that's coming in the future as the story develops. The setting/background for the novel is an interesting mix, not often I see someone using Once Upon a Time in America as a backdrop for their story.

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benji47
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Pretty unique setting, glad the author has left his comfort zone. I’ve never seen a godfather fanfic on here,I’m really exited to see more and where this is headed.

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dramatic_reader69

I just read this, it looks promising but I didn't watch the Godfather. quick question, is this a system novel cause i didn't see one.

2mth
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CodeKingu

I can’t stand these ai generated garbage fics. Every line just seems so fake and soulless. While ai makes it so you don’t have to worry about grammar mistakes, I feel like half of the word count just gets filled flowery bull.

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Ninja_King_3834

Great start so far. Being a big fan of the godfather I hope you continue with this. Do not mess this up.

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Daoistkq4gJg

a very good story I've never seen a Godfather Fanfic before So this is my first experience with this type of fanfic and also it will only be one girl or will he have other girls since he will be the crime lord

1mth
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zNoir
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More chapters please, first I see a ff of the godfather. 🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🙀🥵🥵🙀🥵🙀🙀🥵🙀🥵🥵🙀🥵🙀🥵🙀🥵🙀🥵🙀🥵🙀🥵

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Hyuga_Tobirama

This story has great potential! I have never seen a Godfather fic on here so this story is pretty much niche. I look forward the mc building his own family and becoming a Godfather in his own right

1mth
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Renkopermanov

Goog working😃[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap]

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BrucePickEmUp

Not really a expert on reviewing things but this is one of the best novel I’ve ever read on this app

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Tobi_ntr_king

didn't give me a chance to complain until now

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ali_seifi

5 out of 5 , I would say thats all you need before you start reading this fic but allow me to elaborate on this beautiful Godfather fanfic. Set near the end of WW2 our MC, originally from Earth, acquires the oh so wanted system. He can add to his attributes like strength and agility, he can see his realtionships with all people he's acquainted with and he gets tasks to complete, all for the goal of establishing the strongest Mafia family. The grammar is solid, thr background leaves no room for argument, the main and supporting characters are good enough and its updated daily. One thing that i must object is the release rate, as with only one chapter a day you're always left unsatisfied and looking for more. It's simply unbearable TT

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DavI
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---------.--------------Goooooooooooooooooood .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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D_J_0151

I love this novel, I think the mix of worlds and the interactions between the characters are very good, I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. Great job, author. _______

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Insert_Here

This is the review I should have given since I actually really like the story and tbh i am still reading it but yeah it is actually really good

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Kalash_Dias

just love it.... can't ask for something better

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mouhib

man i don't care about you your righting is fire and enough for me to support your book.keep up the good work

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