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After his sudden death a man is reincarned in the world of ice and fire with the arcane power of a D&D character
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Escribe una reseña'Reviewed' as of chp12(latest) Score: 3.2/5 TLDR; Too few chps to properly review but I'm dropping this. MC feels like a Stark fanboy. Can't take it seriously. Not for me but give it a try perhaps you might like it. WQ(4/5) - Nothing abhorrent & quite readable thought there are some mistakes(misspellings, capitalizations, etc.). The writing itself isn't too flat & can be somewhat entertaining to read. A bit of editing could really help elevate the story. SD(4/5) - Personally, it seems the author has a definite goal & vision of the plot. Not a bad premise & pretty decent execution. CD(2/5) - I believe this is a biased score but mostly due to my utter dislike of the MC. It mostly stems from the fact that it seems he is a Stark fanboy & lapdog, I can understand playing the game but you have literally powerful magic. You can be anyone but MC choose to be a vassal Lord to the Starks. Some might enjoy this. US(3/5) - Decent post rate. For now. WB(3/5) - It's GoT. Nothing added or explored so far.
I give you 5stars For creativeness Backstory and all Potentialof the story to grow more This story of yours is an excellent one i tell you coming from my perspective a free reader Hoping for mofe chapters to read coming from you aauthor This one is saved and already downloaded on my library hahahahah Thanks to the author praying for your good health
Portrait of Lyanna F**king Strak. Enough said. Here a notepad screenshot of my bashing of Starks. Because of word cap of webnovel's comment and review sections ........ ......... ........... ...................
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I normally don't start a story with a few chapters Absolutely happy that I jumped in the beginning. was only gonna read 1 chapter before bed but stayed up late reading till that last one available. Truly recommend this it's an amazing read.
Really good read. Takes on a different Is approach than others. Can't wait to see what happens next
The story is well written, and the way you build up the story is stupendous not to mention how the character interacts with the world, he knows he's powerful yet he doesn't let it get to his head he knows that he should be careful specially after chapter 12 when he learned that his actions have garnered the attention of a few beings. All in all keep up the good work, though I won't just put aside some minor details that should be fixed, all in all though I love it, specially if DnD is included in it.
Your writing quality is $#!t... from the @nvs. Really, what a disappointment. A wonderful plot ruined by $#!tty writing. At least try to write properly. It's very easy.
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Autor Daoist611904
Beautifully written story so far. Grammar on point. I love DnD and I love game of thrones so put them both together and you get this awesome story! Keep up the good work!