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from what I have read the writing quality is good the story is good but having the pay after the 7th chapter pretty much rated as 1 star I would still have payed and read it if it was the 30th chapter
Hey guys, humble and shameless author here. I see some of y'all talking bad stuff about my novel and I understand it. I really do, whether it is because I made a mistake or if it's just some of you didn't like it, that's okay. That's fine by me. Whether you like it or not, that's my work, and I'm giving my all to it, doing my best and learning every day to do it even better. And if you don't like it, just drop it, because there are readers out there who like this work, and I see y'all. That's why I'm excited to say that the second arc is being released, and for those who felt lost while reading first arc (The Ruined World), know that the second arc (From The Ashes) will explain everything and set new heights to Kurt's journey. So buckle your seat belts, all who endured the confusion of narration and pace in the first arc, because the ride's gonna be WILD!!! Don't forget to drop your power stones, reviews, comments, everything you want! I'm here for y'all, and I'm not going anywhere, and I'll do my best with my time to release at least one chapter a day. Your support keeps me running. Always!
spoilers --I got a free trial preview and made it to chapter 31.the story kinda ends at 28...chapter 29 is called end/beginningand it continues like a new book with elements from the previous.Until 28 it seemed like everything was good; MC got back on his feet, got stronger, got a love interest, a new family, and an evil organization to fight. Then it goes from storytelling to a quick summary of everything going wrong.The author summarizes MC losing control to kill off his new family-- which will ruin his new romance. Not showing like a two chapter battle, but telling, like "He woke up, ripping out Roderick's heart." Yeah I suppose the crystal might have controlled his mind, or the system he swore to kill might have nerfed him again................I read three more chapters hoping for an explanation but it just rolls off in a different direction. Maybe I left too soon. You wrote the characters so well, I was invested in the characters and felt like they got flushed for a different story direction.
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even though it is system novel you tried to change story line from other system novel and story plot also good
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The story plot is very interesting, it's a great system story to read. The beginning gets one so hooked and you just keep reading, highly recommended.
I have to say, despite the highs and lows of the update stability, the author is doing a great work with this story.I see that he probably messed up at some points, got lost in others, but the way hes'sdeveloping the story, since the academy arc, has much more consistency than ever.He still seems like having a long way to go in working the characters, but some of them are very charismatic, and I'm loving the way the story is unfolding.I'm curious about what will happen at chapter 106.Thank you for your work and effort, author.I hope there are more readers like me that will give you the support you deserve.Dont't give up!
The MC is so dumb that I can not read this anymore. As a previous thief the actions he takes after regressing is utterly stupid. It’s like he was just born five minutes ago or something level of stupid.
Here is my review. Good writing skill and I can know it since the first chapter. the story is well-built. I suggest you to lock chapter between chapter 35-40
Pretty good. Not much useless information dumps (read up to chapter 7) and pacing is great so far.
This is really great for characters and the concept of being a Rouge rather than some sort of assassin in the normal sense of things. You have made it so these characters build off each other in some sort of way that make the Main character become better for his style of fighting and thinking to which is awesome and funny. Thank you.
a nice book with nice and understandable characters that you want to see dead:)
Oh my heart... I couldn't expect less from you Author... Your books are great and very engaging, but this one leaves me on the biggest adrenaline... I can't wait for the next chapters, I'll stop talking if you haven't seen it give spoilers of the episodes... Simply wonderful
This is the second book I'll be reading from this author and in my opinion it's still maintain a very high quality
Even if I don't like system novels that much, this one is keeping me hooked into it! I'm curious about what's gonna happen next!
GUYS, I FIXED MY MISTAKE!CHAPTERS 01 TO 40 ARE NOW FREE TO READ ON VOLUME 00!!!You can follow up from Ch41 on regular volume 01, without having to worry about paying for chapters so early on the story.Enjoy!!!