DxD: Ink and summoning

LV 14

Kabuk5

The idea is interesting, but grammar is awful, not in that there are errors, but in it jumping between correctly written paragraphs and machine-translated quality sentences, It feels like a bunch of authors wrote sentence by sentence in a forum, and most of them are foreigners using bing to translate.

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LV 14

Glitz1

The story is good and all but its just all over the place. I gets to one point to another and sometimes you don't even know how the mc got their. It doesn't explain. If it were better though it would be a good story.

LV 14

Sirrow

DxD world has more then enought waifus but too add more women from anthor worlds this is too much the plot is ………… I dont like it the story is lam

LV 5

ninetf99

Great story but it is a hard read not as bad as most machine translated stuff but still quite bad but it is a fun read Great story but it is a hard read not as bad as most machine translated stuff but still quite bad but it is a fun read

LV 12

ABananaStoleMyDog

The story itself is fine, but the grammar if lacking. Furthermore There are various parts throughout the story where things aren’t properly explained, such as the sudden change in perspectives with no direct way of determining which persons point of view is being used(the first fight with the devils). Additionaly english sentences don’t have exclamation points in front of them. Overall the idea is interesting but the execution is someWhat lacking. I really look forward to seeing this story improve and grow as it is a rather interesting idea. Also a rather small nitpick, but in the title it should be DxD not Dxd.

LV 5

akasuna123

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LV 2

Spading

Grammar and some writing errors stuff or something... Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler

LV 1

JackalVadim

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LV 4

Krishnbarad

The Story is quite nice, even though the very concept is quite similar to that of the DxD: Summoning; another good fanfic in web novel, but still the content is enjoyable, its just that I unable to understand most of the parts due to bad grammar, otherwise its fine enough to read, and I will give you 5 stars cause of your hard work as writing is hard and I know cause I am a writer myself, just keep going, dude...😏

LV 4

FrogGodKing

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

LV 1

James_Fennell

It's a wish fulfilment isekai, yes. But it's an interestingly implemented wish fulfilment isekai. I like the idea for MC's powerset, and the author has done a good job of showing the different characters' personalities. And I always enjoy a DxD story which gives humanity a chance to stand on its own. The only real negative is that there are some glaring grammatical mistakes and a few instances where the MC's logic falls apart from one sentence to the next, contradicting themself. Thankfully that last doesn't happen too often.

LV 4

DeathKid

Its good but there are parts where he get ability but you dont explain what kind of ability it is its okay to have cliffhanging but your forgetting to write the explanation

LV 5

SR_2027

The story is nice and mc is strong and can summon people from other franchise (specially Type-moon) and he's not dense and idiot but I think that soon I think that his power will be too op for staying in dxd. I hope you introduce multiverse traveling like going to Arifureta, Tale of rise of sheild hero, Dragon Ball, Champion, Naruto, Type Moon Universe and many other animes...

LV 5

WaterCharmer

I have not read the story yet but the moment i see annahilation maker which is my fav sacred gear you get all 5 star from me :)😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

LV 1

DICKY_MAULANA

this story is very interesting and i really enjoy it... I hope the author will speed up the continuation of the story and I will continue to support your work.

LV 6

Henrique_Paiao

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LV 3

DarkSlay

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LV 6

Henrique_Paiao

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