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Garion was once a famous fitness influencer and a body scientist, and now, he was reincarnated in this mana cultivation world.
Just like other novel MCs, he also got his own system, [God Gym].
The system was simple. Every person who trained in his gym would give him power. The more people trained, the stronger he became.
Many cultivators called him a heretic just because of the weird workouts he did, but he didn't even care.
Because, once his gym members started crushing those arrogant sects... nobody would be laughing anymore.
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Escribe una reseñaa diamond in the rough as far as system/cultivation novels go. I wasnt paying 100% attn to grammar since the story drew me in too much but I didn't notice anything. World building has only started so there isn't much but personally I like it more than the last novel I read which had 10+ ch straight of info dump. The main characters thus far have been dealt with well nowhere near 2d. tldr positives: everything negatives: not enough chapters
I like it a lot, I can pretty much smell the sweat and blood of my regular gym just by reading this, it's a nice twist of the classic cultivation plot, I don't like however that the explanation of autopsy to Dahlia was just ignored, I would've loved to read about her reactions, thoughts throughout (like if she thought he was a demonic practitioner or something) and learn a little about anatomy along the way and I also don't like the approach of his MMA fighting style, I don't have a problem with it per se, I watch MMA, but I just feel it's a little lacking when there's fight scenes (like not descriptive enough or not enough impression) because the average person doesn't understand MMA moves, including me even though I watch MMA I'm not particularly knowledge in martial arts, so generally when cliche Cultivation novels write something like "Heaven-Slaying Thousand Cuts is a sword skill that let's you slash a thousand times in a second, it is said that if cultivated to perfection you can cut the clouds and heaves a thousand times in a fraction of a second" you can picture that image in your mind quite easily, meanwhile I had to Google what an arm bar is In conclusion I really love the novel and I look forward to it, you have my full support!
Revelar spoilerI love this novel. to me the cultivation system that the mc developed makes the most sense out of anything I've seen and to me seems like a more natural cultivation evolution. why use imaginary when you already got what you need?
Hey, I just finished reading your story and wow. Honestly, it was so vivid, like the whole thing was playing out in my head while I read. I’m an artist, and I usually take on commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art, and Cover Art. And honestly, your story has that spark to look absolutely stunning as a comic or webtoon 👀. I’d be really excited to bring it to life visually (no pressure, of course, but I couldn’t resist trying). If you’d like to take a look at my work, or chat more about the idea, feel free to reach out on Discord 👉 bennett_lol Looking forward to hear your thoughts!
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I really like this as it was quite unique with its own cultivation system. And also althought its quite slow, it's pretty good. Just wanted more chapters.
I'm in love with this book and its concept as well as the attention to detail for everything i truly hope for more updates in the future.
The clash between Garion’s modern workout logic and the cultivators’ old traditions is hilarious and hype at the same time. The moment his gym members start overpowering sect disciples? That would look incredible illustrated. 📌 Discord: acelinemonjea_11679 📌 Instagram: AcelineMonjea
Cheguei ao final e estou esperando novos capítulos ansiosamente! Parabéns autor por nos trazer uma obra diferente em meio a tantas coisas repetitivas.
Pretty decent, a new take with the gym concept, but I don't really know if the author's grammar will stay as bad in the later chapters
A peak novel for gym rats and gym freaks that is 🔥🔥🔥 if you got time for complaining, you got time for training. LETS GOOOOOO🗣️🗣️🗣️
i dont normaly do reviews but this here book is one of the best I've read in a long time real good mix of reality ,fantasy and comedy you will not regret reading thos book
I like this story, so far, and it has a lot of potential, so keep it up author and update more. I need to know what happened next.👍
It's really good and with the new realms that don't really like xianxia or magic, it's good and unique. And also it's really use the theme of being a gym trainer which he brought to the other world.
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I dont know i am yet to read. quick qn will there be romance? personally i hope there isn't through out. like you can have girls without romance or such right?