I Am in Bleach World, But The System Thinks I'm in One Piece World

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jil_jung_juk

Idiotic Chinese author spoiled the whole story by setting asauchi swords have spirits, not blank state which it was supposed to be .

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AncientSlime

Retarded MC, modified world background, the zanpakuto rules are completely chinafied. Everything else is okay so I won't be too harsh with the score

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Justaguy

If you never read or watched bleach then this fanfic is for you. But if you have ever even seen anything about bleach than this story will be absolutely horrid. main character is basic self insert which is fine but it's like most Chinese self inserts, the author changed the basic premise of the power system. in the actual bleach manga the zanpakto (idk how to spell it) is formed from your own soul using a blank empty sword that you imprint your soul onto. this story gets rid of that altogether and makes it so that anyone can have any zanpakto that's ever made instead. the writing quality isn't bad but if you know anything about bleach this will be a disappointment. This story keeps stating that he's week and average but yet he's skipping "grades" in the shinigami academy. maybe it gets better later on but I'm not gonna continue reading cause i can already see where it's headed. hope this helps.

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SKAJ

its ok i guess, but this fic has WAY too many info dump again and again for EVERYTHING each power, each skill, take up almost MOST of the chapter

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ChatGPTReview

📖 Title: I Am in Bleach World, But The System Thinks I'm in One Piece World 🏷 Genre: Crossover × System × Comedy × Action ⭐ Rating: ★★★★☆ – “Fun twist on the system trope, but could lean more into Bleach worldbuilding.” 🔍 Serious Review: Kyoya gets the [One Piece Achievement System] with promises of Marine, Pirate, or Bounty Hunter glory — except the system completely misfires and drops him in the Bleach world instead. The premise is clever, letting the MC exploit powers and rewards not meant for this universe. The comedic frustration between Kyoya and the clueless system adds charm, while the crossover possibilities open the door for fun, unexpected matchups. However, the story could benefit from deeper Bleach integration and richer character interactions to elevate it beyond the initial gag. 💡 Verdict: A fresh, meta spin for fans of both Bleach and One Piece. Great for readers who enjoy seeing a protagonist exploit a broken system in the wrong world. 🎯 Reader Bait: Ever wondered what happens when you bring Devil Fruit rewards to a world of Soul Reapers? You’re about to find out. 😂 Meme Review: MC: “I’m ready to sail the Grand Line!” System: “Cool, here’s a steamed bun from Rangiku.” MC: “Wait… WHAT WORLD IS THIS?!” Basically One Piece grind in a Bleach neighborhood. Broken system, confused MC, and endless opportunities to troll canon. Tagline: “When your GPS says One Piece but you end up in Soul Society.”

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TentaPriest

Is this a translation? if so, can you tell me the name of the original?

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Antares_94

Typical Chinese fanfic: too much unnecessary information that doesn't contribute to the plot. After reaching chapter 141, it feels like the plot has stalled somewhere in the middle.

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95_novel_maniac_95

the start was ok , although the got arrogant the moment he got the system.... but it is possible for a normal person suddenly gaining oportunity to reach the top. upto the point i read (chapter 12) ....if you like bleach zampakuto power system, you would be disappointed because...in the fic asauchi are swords of different powers and strength and stronger zampakuto can be inherited..... rather than each one being born of shinigami's soul this being unique

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W33D66

Too bland. Very uninteresting plotlines, info dumping in every chapter, and characters are budget chinese novel npcs where their only job is to praise mc. And wtf is the deal with the breath of all things shit, mc can't seem to shut up about it.

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BrandPatriarch

I'm hooked, almost ignored this one because of low ratings, so 5 starsㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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Tristan_009

nice....I like it Keep up the great work ps Vampire devil fruit. I'm just saying.

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h_x_h

The story started well, let's see how it progresses . power levels are good till now & zanpacto is also fresh.

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Xavier_Fernandez

So far, so good. The author seems to have a good grasp of Bleach lore. I've only read the first four chapters, but it seems to have potential.

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Marvinzoksu

i tried my best to keep readying but it is just too much. I didnt know much about bleach world but it is very sus about everything and many thing didnt make sense.

Hi there! I had to reach out because your story left such an impression on me. The way you describe scenes makes them bloom inside the reader’s mind it’s rare and honestly impressive. I kept thinking how incredible this world would look as a comic or visual adaptation. I’m a commissioned artist, so if you ever feel like exploring a collaboration, I’d be excited to talk. Totally up to you I just wanted to appreciate your amazing storytelling. Thanks for creating something so memorable! You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love

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Suhas_Ballary_6129

overall nice and can I get it's original name

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Themasterofsystems

Why make something like this after nen exorcist

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TrolFaze

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oceansage

I love this. Apart from changing the zanpaktu setting to fit devil fruit logic, every thing else is good. I mainly like MC character. //////////////////////////////////////