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James woke up on a spaceship, which is going to crash into the earth with a star wars system when he crashed he found out he was in Marvel as he saw Phil Coulson and was brought into Shield How will our MC get himself out of this mess? What will become of Marvel when someone has star wars technology?
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all your brothers and sisters are like children. mc is like that too. I don't understand how this is the case when this novel should be a better version of a novel. I think the first novel was even worse.
This is the second version with a lot of plot holes fixed and a altered story with a different system.
Grammar could be better, a lot of the mistakes are spelling mistakes that even some free online grammar check would find. (Like repeatedly writing blastor instead of blaster) Personally I don't like the current development (Chapter 13), it's completely overused by fanfics recently. Everything else so far is good, I quite liked the idea and implementation of the system.
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