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Why am I holding on you

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Him - "You took away my first kiss, you have to be responsible for it"
Her - "That was my first kiss too Senior. Am I asking you to be responsible?"
Him - "Ask me... I am waiting"
Her - "Shut up, get away otherwise I will call my brother"
Him - "I am sure he will support his friend, atleast for this"
Her - "You- BROTHER"
Bro - "Yes my lovely sister"
Her - "Brother this friend of yours is asking me to be responsible for his first kiss"
Bro - "Serene I taught you since we were young that we should be responsible for our deeds"
Her - "But that was just an accident, you told me too, that I shouldn't be bother with it!"
Bro - "Well I didn't knew it was him"
Him - "Love can you stop getting angry"
Her - "Who is your love!!"
Him - "Except you, no one was, no one is, no one will and no one is allowed to be."
Her - "Ahhh... Don't talk to me."
(Not a part of story but how the character is designed and how story it would be.)
A love story between two college students Serene and Soham. Serene's childhood was messed up because of her struggled childhood with her brothers in orphanage. And Soham's life was too peaceful that it irritates him.
There first encounter was not good but the last will be sweetest.
There story doesn't have those lots of up and down in relation or life but it do have some spice.
This story isn't like FL settings up an empire from scratch or anything related to business or revenge or creating her identity to show to the world (because she already have everything) but a cute love story with some love hate relation initially and then about persuading someone to accept him.

This is more or less all about love. How a egoistic man fell in love with her who don't even give a damn about his presence even though they both are each others first kiss.
ML hated her for snatching away his first kiss but in span of time, he was the most grateful person in the world for having that moment with her.
But he wants her to be around him only... But she didn't even recognized him as a acquaintance in her life, leave, not even a human being relate to her in her life... poor him....
Initially it was love hate and later it was love in the air. Initial chapters will be little fast to show her and her siblings love for each other. Later it will be cute little love story.
Hope you will like it. If you can than just try 10 to 15 chapters. Might you like it

#I am writing another book too... please check out... OPPOSITES ATTRACT MY LOVE...
#English is not my first language. And I can't afford to say it as my second one either, so don't be pissed by it. It is at least bearable.
#Cover photo doesn't belong to me.

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    P_A_S
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    Well story won't be 'so called story' it's new, I won't say best English but good enough that you won't hate it .. I'll try my best to update stable... character design I would try my best... hope you love it

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    Esha_18

    I got to know about this book from the "recommendations section" and what attracted me to the book was it's synopsis! The way FL's brother betrays her for his friend was something new and interesting and I wanted to know more about it.. 👀😂 The story so far is really good.. Both the ML and FL are fierce but cute personalities! ❤️ Somehow this story gave me inspiration seeing a little orphanage do such hard work to get out of the hellish orphanage.. ❤️🔥 Also the relationship between the siblings and the ML and FL both is described beautifully ❤️ I recommend this book to all those people who love reading about love stories and cute romance 💖💞❤️

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    JOUDI
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    This story is absolutely fantastic!!!!😁🥀 If you like the following points that means this novel is for you~~: ( i may forget some lol🤭) •I didn't see a r$pe scene in this story ,so no r$pe. •There are no misunderstandings. Well there are, but they will get solved easily. So it's not that much of a problem. •mystery. This novel is mysterious. The characters have their own mystery and you have to tie things together.(I think so) •the sweetness between the leads is just .....uwu. I have no words ,but I will tell you there is endless dog food 🤭. •the FL's brothers are really cute and funny .Their sibling relationship is just goals!! •the FL is not a weakling. She is strong and smart. She is not the bullied,she is the BULLY. • some of you may hate the ML at first because of the problem at first, but he is absolutely adorable!!! He is cold towards people but gentle to his girl. She will be spoiled rotten by him. there are a lot of points more, but I just forgot lol.🤧 I highly recommend this novel!! There are some troubles with the grammar ,but hey! Who am I to think so? English is also not my first language and it's hard for people whose first language is not English. But you can understand. It's understandable a that you may not even bother with it (like me°`°) I really love this novel , so I hope it's your cup of tee~~~~💜💜

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    Enaaa
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    I love it I read it. I love it I read it. Gee thanks author. This one is really great. If someone wants something out of box ( like scheming all around type) then I recommend you to read this one. Maybe you will also smile like me while reading this...

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    xiaolinyie

    it's a good novel but why do you used Love and Produce game as your cover?? It's better to change it and use a new cover before you get copyright issue😱😱

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    Hazy_Sunshine_

    Well!A captivating fantastic book.....Strong ,Independent FF And Strong,Possesive ML a perfect combination .....♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!! Support this book!!!

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    divya12

    I like the novel a lot . siblings relationship is very good. this story is different from other novels . looking forward for the FL and ml relationship .

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    Hazy_Sunshine_

    well loving it ♥♥♥!!! Give it a try you won't regret it ,that what I am sure...well I greedily and shamefully want the mass release but if only possible....and can't wait to read more!!!😊😊😊

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    patan08

    new book came in market Huh! I always try to find simple love stories with not so messed up life of FL because I don't like to have tension before I go to sleep... so I just hope it will be fine and regular

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    lone_flower

    A fine novel👍👍👍😉 . I really like the female lead's character😊😊. a great novel,fun to read . I will really recommend you 🙂🙂the female lead is fierce kind and great😁😁😇😇

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    kenzie_03

    if u like college and fun stories u will really love this book I promise. the story development is too good. the brotherly love is also written so so fun and exciting. I really fell in love with this book and I can not end my day without reading that day's update. this book is really worth reading. hope u enjoy it.....

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    starlight123

    this novel is very very interesting and i love it alot......while reading this novel i don't know how many times my heart fluttered😍😍 great work!!!

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    Ning_ning

    Ok so, it's for those of you who are looking for something fun. And if your one, then trust me you are at the right place! it's an amazing story with tons of fun and loving characters!!

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    Kera_Clara

    Hi dear author,thank you for writing this. I love it so much and update regularly please ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞😍😍😍😍

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    Simply A beautifully well written and heartfelt book. I suggest this book to everyone. The author takes you on a fulfilled journey of fun, love, commitment and you hunger for more chapters💯❤❤❤❤❤❤ Serene and Soham are such a fun Super Couple. The other characters in the book are fun too. I hope the author continues with there fun journey because each and every character has fun personalities and I am loving the journey of Soham and Serene journey together❤❤❤❤❤❤

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    Inara98

    This novel is pretty interesting. I'm pretty sure you won't regret reading, instead you will regret not reading it earlier. 🥀 I reread it multiple times even tho the novel didn't end yet.😌

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    wow I never read such a lovely story... lot's of dog food... lots of love i m just in love with this novel... Female lead is awesome... male lead is henpecked lover... brother sister bond awesome... possessive lover awesome... friends are awesome...🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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    Fatima_Qureshi_7174

    the storyline is just amazing and i like Serene's character as to how she pulls her brothers out from the orphanage and also how she supports them as well as to the way she becomes an independent woman

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