With Naruto System

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HadesOnDrugs

Great combination of manga and novel. The story is interesting too even though its a cliche one. Keep up the work 👍👍. Waiting for some action😙😙

LV 5

memberberry

I'm going to do a favor for the next one, and one that I'd like done before me. A review by an adult, not a sick fanboy of the naruto series. This fanfic is one more wish fulfillment like so many others out there. first point, I think the author tried to get away from the clichés in the beginning, but the clichés exist for several reasons, and by taking these clichés the author has to make sense of these "holes" in the plot. well, I imagine this fanfic was inspired by the Chinese novel (In Different World with Naruto System) but your novel is very poorly thought out and unrealistic from the point of view of character integration. in short, this is unpalatable for adults or minimally intelligent teenagers.

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