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ch 24 After the Draw

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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ch 18 Unforeseen Resistance V

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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ch 0 4 Traveling to new York times square

The Soccer/football System

Sports · MRmoney

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ch 17 Unforeseen Resistance IV

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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ch 16 Unforeseen Resistance III

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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The conclusion is too fast and too easy. Jack should toyed both of them before killing them off. Just like how they toyed their victims before killing them off.

ch 0 8 CHAPTER 7: IT’S A SCREAM BABY PT 3

Horror Killer

Movies · Jackoftrades

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ch 0 3 First system Rewards

The Soccer/football System

Sports · MRmoney

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ch 15 Unforeseen Resistance II

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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ch 12 Derby Normand IX

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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ch 10 Derby Normand VII

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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Great story! Thanks for the chapter

ch 0 9 Derby Normand VI

Football: Passion Unkindled

Sports · SaltyPineapple

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Thanks for the chapter! The story is good but too fast-paced imo. A break is needed between one sequence to another. The concept is good and I can't wait for more!!!

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