Icharris

Idk… really finding this recent stuff quite distasteful. He can just say 1) she tried to kill/imprison me (a squire then) as a master. Something if I recall is against the federations rules. 2) attest it was just two tier 10 techniques that he didn’t know would act that way. And 3) she provoked him by taunting him about event number 1. With a martial sages insight she’ll know all this is truth. While this wouldn’t necessarily acquit him, it wouldn’t make sense for this to not massively downgrade his crimes. The federation must have a highly functional set of rules with plenty of consideration and readonability to allow all martial masters to submit to its rules. Just feels forced. But then again, so does Rui’s loss of control. I know it’s part of “finding himself”. But it’s really quite different than the way he’s been portrayed the rest of the novel. Will be kind of disappointing if finding yourself is just an excuse to let MC stir up a bunch of trouble… Anyways love the novel still. Just some mild complaints with the recent plot

I think this is all very stupid. Why didn’t Rui just say he has a personal life and death grudge with one of the masters on his evaluation council. He wanted to avoid her anyways. The foundation must have rules for this. After all, many of its members must have grudged and fought each other. And it doesn’t seem like an organization that would ignore such concerns. Would be a blatant abuse of power over masters who it’s meant to represent.

Pretty cool idea

Quite dislike this whole recent theme about lacking "experience". While sure he definitely should lack experience compared to other martial masters, after all he's a new martial master. I do not feel he should lack significantly compared to other seniors. Afterall the complexity of battles rise greatly as ones realm does. His years as a godly senior and now master should be like gold compared to copper. Far more valuable. I also dislike it because it just doesn't make that much sense. His entire adaptive evolution is supposed to analyze and tell him the best action. While I can see the argument his models are a little unprepared for account for martial minds which also have an element of adaptive evolution, it should not be that extreme since his martial path is literally adaptive evolution and he has a martial mind an order of magnitude greater than other masters. Would much prefer if the lack of "experience" thing was a minor reason he was not fully effective against martial masters and the bigger reason being the lack of techniques that he can pare together, something which would make much more sense given the martial mind literally unlocks ones ability to use many more active techniques as once.

I guess this is the end. While this novel had some flaws - namely the cultivation system was a bit messy/unclear with power levels being too variable - it was also super interesting and I enjoyed both the concept the MC pursued for power as well as how his system worked. Too bad. Genuinely hope all is well for Author and he will someday return.

Battle of four princes now. The saintly one. Rajak. And Raijun (the martial squire one). Though I can only imagine Raijun will mostly lose his support since the martial union would rather support Rui than him besides the most extreme supremacists among them. All the others are already checkmated by Rui