Efthee

Efthee

8h

Replied to Red_roseking

I am sorry, what were you saying, i got hypnotized by something's.

ch 25 Chapter 25: Road to Recovery and New Project

White-Haired Template System

Anime & Comics · LuxVonDeux

Efthee

8h

Commented

nice SCP reference

Therefore, it is necessary to Secure, Contain and Protect the ancient weapon

One Piece : Comparison Broadcast

Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation

Efthee

2d

Commented

So I was right with my comment on the previous chapter. mc did turn out to be gay and after making out with tohru's father it was a match made in heaven, they married and then that's the end of the story.

ch 62 Hiatus

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Efthee

2d

Replied to Simpformakima

lol I didn't expect that many likes

ch 61 Chapter 61

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Efthee

3d

Commented

so stupid

ch 53 Chapter 53

Starting as a Class Five Mutant

Anime & Comics · Zaelum

Efthee

4d

Commented

if you are considering giving him those eyes, you could write a plot during the usj event, basically he being the strongest in class has to go against nomu to buy time for reinforcement, and you can show him that he is somehow winning since nomu can't touch him. So shigaraki with the help of kurogiri's portal tries to pump nomu with a trigger drug but something happens and mc gets the trigger which results in his quirk 'pseudo awakening' and thus making him win the fight and get the six eyes later after recovery. Of course this is just a basic outline, you can do whatever you want. btw you should clarify mc and ochako's relationship to Gwen, I really don't like drag out slow romance in a battle fic/manga. makes no sense and it's very irritating!

ch 12 Chapter 12 - A Strange Beginning at Yueei

[Heroic World]: The Symbol of Power

Anime & Comics · CaesarZ

Efthee

4d

Replied to Kutay1661

it's dropped bro, no fic that hasn't been updated for 2-3 weeks will continue unless the author is very specific, even then the quality will only drop. it was a good fic, very confusing at times (there's time travel and alternate worlds stuff) and it was actually picking up the pace into the last few chapters but yeah up to you

ch 38 Chapter 38 Bloodline Depriving (Part 1).

I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.

Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign

Efthee

5d

Replied to Hasan_Shopnil

The hell, mc was an ordinary person and couldn't even move properly in his dragon form and he took 10 years to master his abilities, my gosh what an idiot mc (sarcasm).

ch 0 4 New visitor

In Tensura as the Storm Dragon Veldora

Anime & Comics · Dead_ghost

Efthee

5d

Posted

Author, I am sorry for the low rating but to me this is what the novel should be rated as rather than all these other weird 5 stars reviews. I have only read 8 chapters and I don't think I can handle more ngl. The reason for such a low rating is several such as that the writing definitely needs work, the grammar feels weird (mc's thought should be in quotations rather than a square bracket), the sentence structure is out of place sometimes and is wacky af. The plot/premise behind the story is good but the execution is horrendous, to me it seems like Mc is all over the place, he has motivations to be a writer, but doesn't know why? he wants to go after a mature woman but he also can't decide to leave women his age. (this was kinda confusing to me ngl) There needs to more details about mc but this is optional. There needs to be more details to his system considering it's your original idea. I took a peek at other chapters, and I feel you are adding too many characters for us and mc, like for example why does he need onedara's diary? she ain't gonna die.

I Can Write the Fate of Heroines to My Liking!

Anime & Comics · WildCatMan

Efthee

5d

Commented

both were ready to confront each other...until they realized they were both gay and started making out!

ch 61 Chapter 61

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Efthee

5d

Replied to Jorah26252

yuppers lol

At the end of the day, Futarou decided not to report anything to Tsunade for two reasons: one, it's not his problem until it is, and two, if more than one spy managed to enter the school, then it's more her problem than his.

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Efthee

5d

Replied to chocolatechipsrule

yes i agree with you, if this was your typical Shonen genre, we wouldn't even know about them but this fic is more of a wish- fulfilment type with op mc so I don't think it matters. I would just let the author Cook for now tho~

ch 60 Chapter 60