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This is a great story with a tentative moral of being a good person and what that actually means. There is also the belief of true love and finding your soulmate. I enjoyed it as a light read and sweet simple story. The feedback I have for is that the last 50 chapters got pretty rushed grammatically, some sudden character appearance without explanation and while nice ending not fully satisfying. We are never really introduced to the world I get a feeling it’s about India loosely from the names, but that’s it. It’s glossed over which is fine, this would though draw in the audience. The complication is slightly repetitive but does not a big deal as it’s a short story. I do feel cheated as there was suppose to be let’s say x amount of worlds and we only get 60% of the worlds while the outcome is justified I still feel cheated. I don’t feel that the story takes full advantage of the ML growing skill set. We also do get to see them really in action. Some serious face slapping situations would of been fun. The ideas were great and felt original or presented in an original way I’d say. I feel with some more world building, fuller characters development and challenges we could of easily had another 100 chapters without changing anything. Having said that I really enjoyed it. It unfortunately felt at the end a summary than an chapter. I wanted to give a lower score for the miss opportunities but the actual story deserves a 4+. Happy reading highly recommended.

This is a must read, casual fun 10/10. A fast pace story with well rounded characters. Though at times with the volume of characters at play there is a tendency to kinder dropped the in every so often just to move the story along. Which I approve! There is no confusion on who the main character is though intentionally they kept us guessing on the ML. Great mix of comedy, action pack and some light face slapping. I would classify this as Gender Blend, Wuxia, Sci-fi, Comedy, Detective, Happy Ending, and Romance.