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DaoistFreddieG
male LV 13I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
2017-10-27 Se unió United StatesInsignias 14
Moments 423
No one wants that
ch 680 C679 Pee-Wee
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
Movies · AlienWarlord
This author is a pedo for writing what is essentially how to groom a 5 year old girl.
ch 16 Tenfold benefits of body-strengthening Elixir!
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
AGAIN SHE’S 5 YEARS OLD
She was shocked at herself… she actually let someone hold her hand?
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
She’s five years old
She had thought that she had grown up after that shameful incident last time and has increased her mental resistance as well...
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
This author sucks at writing a coherent plot. Nothing makes sense. Why is he mad at the weakling? Nadia was the one who disrespected his authority. You forget that the MC is a nobody. Everybody else would be more focused on the somebody’s. You’re trying to turn him into a main character and it shouldn’t be happening. Not this early.
But before leaving, he glanced at the half-dead Oliver with a fierce glint in his eyes.
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Author made a useless waste of an mc who’s gonna ride his sister to glory.
ch 0 8 Evolving the Abyss Eyes by 10 times!
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
But he’s gonna freeload off of her
He was not so selfish to freeload off her. He had his own principles as a man.
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Authors can’t help themselves. Everything has to be about their MC.
Jujutsu kaisen lol
ch 0 2 World of demons and exorcists? Side-character?
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Wow you copy and pasted jujutsu kaisen but added a small flare and changed a few things. What a way to make money smh. Took the world of jujutsu Kaiden and ran with it.
ch 0 2 World of demons and exorcists? Side-character?
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Yeah authors can’t help but suck off Danzo and let him run off to cause problems later on every single time. I’m curious if this author will be on his knees, slobbering all over danzo’s wood style jutsu or will he kill him off. I guess we’ll find out how sloppy the author can give.
ch 91 Chapter 91 Resolve
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
One chapter is how long it took before you got lazy and didn’t edit. Congratulations.
Good guy, worthy of the Marvel world.
Marvel: Gwen was stunned
Anime & Comics · GamingwithGreat
Let’s see how long it takes before you start getting lazy and not editing the chapters after translating them.
ch 0 1 Transmigration and the System
Marvel: Gwen was stunned
Anime & Comics · GamingwithGreat
Half baked comedy. Not it
ch 0 8 Hidden Laughter of Children
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
Author thought he was being funny
Kai stared at the monster looking up at him.
Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog
Sports · SandKastle
ch 85 Disaster
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4