Webnovel Author: LoveJoy - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Great! Great! I love how they all felt alive. it's just a pity that you can not explore the filial part of life in this novel as the tag of 'Thrown Bastard' remained it his head and he can not get over it. I just also suggest to make the dialogue more proper it's hard to read it when you don't know where to suddenly stop and you need to read couple back to make some sense to it. Good Job! Thank you! Don't Drop it!

I could say that this type of fanfiction is starting to be so much bothering that the word Evil MC become disgusting. Did you ever find someone who try to make so much reason for something they do this it. Their reason were so saturated that you automatically started to grit your teeth and look away. I'm starting to think if ever some author started to feel if their characters are even alive? Their characters, motive and ideals become so shallow that even if I try to justify it with long prologue that just become a garbage that won't be remembered 'Wasted time'. I'm ranting because you created a MC who feel so paper thin that will be forgotten after an hour or another facfict came out. Focus on one thing, please... you want power? Make it with adventure, Fuck it was full of vengeance that it feels so disturbing at the start. He is already an Emo at the very start. The world is create to facilitate the fantasy of people bro... The great wide world, then you painted it just red and black, done.

First time I read a female lead novel and I love how sharp and vengeful woman can be when their tail is stepped on. Good read keep it up Author!

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Great! Just great as I can say. You gave a solid fist bump for the character background. Makes me anticipate what he can do more and what can he make me see. Explore more.

Good start. very wholesome that you will get lost from the exchange and you will suddenly imagine what they were also seeing. Keep on going!

Cool! The start is nice. The slow world building is also great that you feel like there is more out there that you didn't know. The narration is great and easy to follow.