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too much info on side characters. its annoying

the scene eith the kid is so annoyingly not needed. this is just prolonging a convo that should have happrned at the beginning of the chapter. the extra charactee is not needed in the plot at all. waste of words

i like this part. the author did a good job in this chapter

this is sooo stupid... the hech too wordy too long in one frame. what th he h

author, if u want the character to be consisten stop mame dropping brands that are so conspicuous its so ridiculous

i know this is fantasy stuff but the prior 2 wins are a dud. author could have done better. it only uglified and "idiotified the character and the audience

while it is true that socialites are cruel, they never make power moves like wannabe upper class. the way thus is written gives that vibe.

chloe was bult overall poorly as a character. one of the greatest assets of great storytelling is to make a strong villain who is up to par with the lead, only with opposing stances or views. these types of women are a dime a dozen and the way she acts doesnt match the level of sophistication in her supposed world. she could have been built as deviously manipulative with an angelic facade, it will be cliche but at least more acceptable.

who talks like this these days? i like how the cliche plot is used though. but they have such a power disadvantage. the way Leo is setting her up for failure. if it was a business eeal, she needs to know all the premisw. deception because he did not disclose the motive of the marriage request and chloe's involvement. granted, he was attracted to her even prior to all of that, he should have been honest. and that includes being honest with his mother why he hated chloe

why do u always make ur fl very unmindful and cannot survive without the male lead? i noticed your main leads are too good to be true... also i am hoping on your other works to make your women more intelligent

alright i like the character but what is it with writers writing their gls are stupid f*ckheads???? innicent or pure she is just stuuùpid. how can she even a mafia boss' daughter without a hunt of self preservation. and mind u, the author was trying to let us think she is intelligent. being too naive and being innocent are two different things. gosh!

fropping this. fl is sooo stuupid and lace is too slow with unnecessary plot.

its been so long. the ml is always absent during her emotional abuse. while he and the fl are not in love she is alaays rigud and stupid character disguised as intelligent and harworking but no backbone. gosh! she really shouod just die. or the author can prolly oay us back the coins spent

this authir is so greedy for cins. prolly lost ideas how to prolong the story. stuppid unoriginal and patheti

yup.... there we go agaun soooo stuoid soooo draggung. im reading this on trial. im fuming because this could habe been better 5p chapters back

pffftt5.... come on authornim is this all you've got??? draggung plots??? smh. pathetic

do in this universe, a brilliant doctor like the fl us so stuoid not to even check her an estry e en with the imrpobability. for someone so good in science, and should hsve been empirical in her views, she is always emotional and shuts her mouth in crucial convos, the author is allowing more airtimr to stupid worthless side characters to buold up a draggged storyline just to agitate the readers. sure. my blood prsssure is high because the fl is soo stupid and the ml is a decorative piece of meat. do better!

abd once again here we ladies and gentlemen and woman who allows men in her life to manipuoate her...

this is dragging this too much

bella is killing others by being herself... being too kind is srupid