I read too much
I love the imagination, but you are sooooo careless with terms at times it makes this hard to read at times. You need an editor! Your basic grammar is alright, but you constantly use the wrong word/term/or name for things; often swapping words that sound or look similar, but can have very different meanings. This can happen when you blindly rely on spellcheck or other software without making sure the output makes sense.
ch 443 Reaching The Capital Planet!
Sci-fi · MidGard
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Webnovel
I love the imagination, but you are sooooo careless with terms at times it makes this hard to read at times. You need an editor! Your basic grammar is alright, but you constantly use the wrong word/term/or name for things; often swapping words that sound or look similar, but can have very different meanings. This can happen when you blindly rely on spellcheck or other software without making sure the output makes sense.
ch 443 Reaching The Capital Planet!
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard