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Just remove scott from the story bro. Too annoying to read about him

Thats the issue. He isnt bad but still makes dumb decisions. He is peak human so he isnt actually stupid, but still doing idiotic things makes him annoying. And he is used in all fanfics, I say let him rest now. Hank, Reed and Tony does not even deserve a tragic end, coz most would be happy not sad when they're gone. So just give them silly deaths. Hehe

I say its time for old stevie to kick the bucket. Let him die in a tragedy

Too much unrelevant info and slow story

Fastest reponse i have seen lol

Most of the lines have "as soon" in them. Its annoying to read

im dropping here. its clear with the recent chapters that author is just creating forced situations to increase story length and the mc is just rubbish. MC gets to kage level in a short time and now despite having power and foreknowledge to remove danzo and elders, he is just doing nothing for the sake of this forced plot. What was the point of saving third hokage when MC knew he was responsible for almost all problems and death of parents of his body and this also resulted in him fighting orichimaru unnecessarily. He gained nothing with this fight.

mc is getting dumber just for the sake of a forced plot by author here. hope this changes in future

Either get him to do something about preventing uchiha massacre or just let him be pragmatic in his logical decision to not take a risk. This emotional drama was too forced and pathetic.

unique concept of trying to be cultivator in non-cultivator world instead of using cliche system. i think you should continue to build up on this and complete it till the end. its a fanfiction, so changing some facts and how the things work is under your control. everyone has different tastes, so it is inevitable that some would leave discouraging reviews. In my opinion, as long as mc doesnt becomes a "great power, great responsibility " type hero and focus on his selfish development, it is good.

i think haku was not using ice needles, only normal metal needles. ice was used for the ice mirror technique and temporary ice needle technique. but most of the time haku used normal senbons(metal needles)

pathetic mc

why do i get the feeling of dragon ball z battles and chinese cliche fights from this

why is that annoying system notification public. they should recieve separate messages for their points. this point distribution was forced imo. he only should get the 200k, why split.

just use 3rd person pov. you are repeating the content again and again in different povs