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cliché the only thing I have to say about this novel,........................................................................................................ .......

first i would like to praise the introduction that was the first arc of history as almost perfect, now i have to confess that in the following arcs the story has cooled down because of some small problems like the comedy that for me is almost unbearable and also the coincidences the author tries to put on some masks but still .. One of the things I also wanted to praise are the secondary characters that at the beginning full of life although with the passage of history the characters are almost boring an example and your grandfather. finally I still recommend, and for sure I will continue to follow

what? why don’t you want us to use your imagination? you’re talking about taking away one of the main reasons a person reads. one suggestion is that you start writing chapters of other characters’s visions to give a better view of how people close to him see him

Very good,but has several defects 20 chapters and I don't even know the appearance of the MC and also the relationships with the characters in the story and none even with the parents, with almost no dialogue