I'm just some dude i guess. I have a lot of ideas in my head but often have a hard time going all the way through with them.
2018-09-23 Se unió Sweden
I think I've read three different fanfics where the MC is called Aizen recently. Didn't even consider that this one was going to go the Bleach route. Still sad, it really ruins the fic a lot in my eyes.
[Equipment: The Asauchi is a nameless Zanpakutō. To use it, simply pierce your chest with the blade, merging your soul with the Asauchi. Gradually, you will imprint the essence of your soul on it, allowing you to guide and shape your own Zanpakutō].
Anime & Comics · WizardKiki
Why do all these stories have to be crossovers? Why can't you just use what already exists in the world or Edit it a little or so? Crossovers are one of the quicker ways I lose interest...
[Equipment: The Asauchi is a nameless Zanpakutō. To use it, simply pierce your chest with the blade, merging your soul with the Asauchi. Gradually, you will imprint the essence of your soul on it, allowing you to guide and shape your own Zanpakutō].
Anime & Comics · WizardKiki
Isn't innate level 10? and then you need a ring to progress?
After a tense moment, Elder Xuan finally withdrew his hand and opened his eyes. "Zhi Wei, your innate soul power reaches level 15," he announced with a smile. "This is a good start. With dedication and proper training, you can achieve great things in the future."
Anime & Comics · Pres_Quantum
No, because it is not written from their perspective. I'm guessing the theory about English not being the author's first language is true. And some languages don't have a word for Teenager specifically.
Ollivander didn't notice a crack in his ironclad faith, all because a teenager walked into his wand shop and picked out a wand for himself.
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
I do know how hard it is. and I know that it's even harder to put your work out there. But copying is not writing.
In the future, Mukai would eventually marry and have two children. But when one of his children, a son, became sick, Mukai struggled to afford his treatment. To make the needed money, he began spying on Konoha for Kirigakure.
Anime & Comics · Pikachu234
well, not if you do it extremely slowly I suppose. They explode because pressure is built up too quickly, after all.
I didn't respond, instead, I went to the fridge, grabbed a bowl with about 40 already peeled boiled eggs, and said, "I think so, after I finish my training, I'll eat a bit more."
Anime & Comics · WizardKiki
You keep saying teenager, but wasn't he in the body of a 10 year old? Or did I misremember that part?
Ollivander didn't notice a crack in his ironclad faith, all because a teenager walked into his wand shop and picked out a wand for himself.
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
I kind of liked it! Hope he becomes a bit more talkative once he gets more comfortable in his situation. Not like Hermione, but a bit more.
How was the first chapter? Was it any good?
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
I understand that you don't have the answers here..I'm just confused and willing to rant 😅
It's still the 38th year of Konoha. With the village having emerged victorious from the Second Ninja World War, it is now nursing its wounds and quietly gathering strength. The medical system is at the forefront of efforts to boost investment, but it's just the beginning, and progress has been slow.
Anime & Comics · jp777
But then the MC and his group must be at least 7 years older than him, so how did they meet when the MC was 4? and Kakashi was clearly not exactly a newborn back then, since he started wanting his mask.
It's still the 38th year of Konoha. With the village having emerged victorious from the Second Ninja World War, it is now nursing its wounds and quietly gathering strength. The medical system is at the forefront of efforts to boost investment, but it's just the beginning, and progress has been slow.
Anime & Comics · jp777
Don't microwave boiled eggs. They tend to explode.
I didn't respond, instead, I went to the fridge, grabbed a bowl with about 40 already peeled boiled eggs, and said, "I think so, after I finish my training, I'll eat a bit more."
Anime & Comics · WizardKiki
If this leads to him becoming yet another boring, braindead, cold, killer MC then I'm completely out. I was really hoping this would be an MC with actual feelings and a good mindset.
My doppelganger pressed a hand on my shoulder and sneered, "See? If you really faced reality, then the personality you'd have locked up here would be Jason's. His expectations, his morals and standards have no place in the shinobi world. They have no place in Kirigakure."
Anime & Comics · Tim_Saian
I am so confused when it comes to the timeline and the ages of people in this fic. From the timeline I can find, in the 38th year of Konoha Tsunade was like 12 years old, Kakashi wouldn't be born for another 13 years, and the second ninja war wouldn't start for 2 more years. But we met Kakashi in an earlier chapter. and you said that the MC and the group would be in their 20s during the Nine-tails attack...but Kakashi is like 13-14 years old when that happens..so how could the MC have met him when he was like 4 years old? It's all just very confusing to me. Fair enough if you've changed some ages, I'd just like to know them so I can keep track..
It's still the 38th year of Konoha. With the village having emerged victorious from the Second Ninja World War, it is now nursing its wounds and quietly gathering strength. The medical system is at the forefront of efforts to boost investment, but it's just the beginning, and progress has been slow.
Anime & Comics · jp777
Had forgotten it existed. Now I dislike it even more than I did back then.
Now, Kakashi was a mess and didn't visit Naruto. I too felt guilty letting Rin die, but I knew I could bring her back later in life.
Anime & Comics · Broxhitman1998
isn't that just like rainforests and stuff, though? and very specific kinds of scorpion? Though I could be wrong, not my area of expertise. It just feels like a very odd choice of main pet when the MC is in Konoha. It feels off, like you just choose it to be different for no reason.
The funny part was that nobody could ever seem to figure out why they kept coming to us as I made sure to stop any inflow of natural energy whenever someone came looking. Thanks to this I was able to figure out that nobody else seemed to be able to sense the stuff for some reason. There was one animal that came to visit that I refused to part with however much to my grandmothers absolute horror, Ren the scorpion.-
Anime & Comics · loskro
if you're getting bored then it's the right choice! just make sure the important parts get mentioned 😁
(A/N: Author here, I just want to say this arc has been stretched longer than expected and I'm getting tired of it so I'll fasten the pace a little bit)
The Greatest Kage
Anime & Comics · YELLOWPIKACHU