Ohhh his older brother knew afterall
The hostile man stared at Kahn as he stood like a mighty warrior, ready to pounce at him any moment.
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Realistically the organization behind them would know why they left in the first place... but this is a novel afterall :>
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Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Why is everyone acting like this is all normal though? It's like Elric doesn't deserve any help at all. This sounds like a typical toxic family for me.
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Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Love you for the chap too, its great as ever~♡♡
ch 0 1 Red wedding
Urban · JennyFerrr
Nice chap, keep up the good work! :3
ch 0 1 A protective Hades
Urban · JennyFerrr
So... the FL is being burdened by the death of her lover 5 years ago because of her grandfather and the ML agrees on a loveless marriage while the catch is he is unscrupulous in his means, and can even resort to extreme measures. It sparks an interesting moral conflict between the two main characters. Lilliana represents light with a shade of darkness from her trauma (or maybe more), and Vincenzo symbolizes complete darkness. I am expecting more from Lilliana because having her lover killed is a traumatic experience. It's hard to visualize how she and the ML can get along with each other when some qualities she abhorred from her trauma (an act of killing) were also done by the ML (In chapter 2). In short, the longer she would know Vincenzo, the more she would feel detached about him.
ch 0 8 I have my ways
Urban · JennyFerrr
Ethan was the FL's ex??
"It wasn't your fault that he's dead. Move on with some other man. It's been eight years, for fuck's sake. Ethan would want that too."
Urban · JennyFerrr
Same energy.
"Saw it, took it." Rosalina shrugged. She had filled the pipe with tobacco earlier but didn't light the thing. She just cleaned it and blew it a few times until the air flows freely.
Urban · JennyFerrr
The beginning is up to a great start, and I also like where this is going. Keep it up!
ch 0 3 A ruthless patriarch
Urban · JennyFerrr
I mean... yes but no
This proved that Kahn's hypothesis right. He had perfectly covered his tracks. Not even his footmarks were left at the crime scene. So the only way someone as strong as Solomon still having their doubts about it would be sensing the aura of his allies that were hiding in his shadow.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor