don't worry about it. it feels shorter not because you're not good enough but because your work is so good that we can't help but want more
[A/N: For those commenting in every chapter whether the chapters are shorter, no, the chapters aren't shorter. I still average over 1.5k words per chapter (without the author notes). As I have repeatedly said, it's not possible for me to write longer chapters and still be able to write daily. I did try 1.7k-1.8k words, but I was completely exhausted within a week and found it very difficult to continue writing. However, I understand that 1.5k words are too little for some people causing my book to be a complete disappointment to you. So, I humbly request you to read the books that do this as I, unfortunately, am not a good enough writer to be able to satisfy your requirements. Have a good day. I wish you well in life.]
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
but hey, your fanfic is really good!
just a suggestion but the rivalry between Itachi and Ken would be more intense if Ken isn't always on the winning side
Naruto with Gamabunta vs Gaara and Shukaku. Gamabunta had trouble holding Shukaku in place so he asked Naruto's assistance in using Transformation jutsu so that he could have claws.
You do gain the attributes and the physical features, yes. But that's only a disguise. You don't get things like a missing limb back, but you can make it look like you have your legs in their previous condition. The problem would come when you have to move your body. While transformed you could get people to believe you stood up straight, you would then have to move forward to get anywhere. People would easily see right through the disguise."
Naruto: Legacy of Lava, Ice and Storm
Anime & Comics · Pikachu234
Author, you did a good job. I have a suggestion though. I noticed that everything so far has been under control. Every impossible moment, the MC has a sure fire way to survive so while he has been put under pressure, he hasn't overcome any impossible moment so far so it might be a good idea to let the mc experience moments of desperation. His fighting style makes it so that he can be aggressive and retreat all the time so I understand that it would be difficult to put the MC in that kind of situation unless he's facing the likes of Nagato, Obito, and Madara. I would say that your work is one of the best fanfics so far, on par with Outsider's resolve but as long as you can pull it off with another character or characters other than Itachi madara obito nagato or even reanimated hashirama or minato, I would say that your work would be the best so far. But it's okay since your work is still one of the best so far. Anyway, it's just a suggestion
you can also do hybrid. upload one at a time and then when you find yourself busy and tired, you can also upload all three chaps at once.
3 chapters per week at once sounds good for you, you get more rest and all while one chapter a time is good for the book. Uploading one at a time will keep your readers hooked up more, you'll find more discussions per chapter. What happens when you upload chapters all at once is that you'll find all the discussions on the last chapter. Readers will usually visit the book once per week. Which means less discussions and votes. Uploading one at a time makes it so that there will be more discussions and visits to the book every week. more visits = more votes and more popularity.
It's not much but take my coins!
thanks for the chap!
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original Pokemon: The Steel Tyrant
4.49
Folker embarks on a Pokemon Journey as he slowly uncovers the mystery behind sudden disappearance of his parents. MC is not a reincarnator I do not own Pokemon Franchise Cover Photo not mine Do check out my other work if you're interested. The Rift: Masked Phantom101 Chs 1.9k Colecciones
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The Rift: Masked Phantom
4.7
Philip had an ambitious dream of turning the world upside down and having his name recorded in the history books but before he could take the first step towards his dream, he died and got reincarnated to a world of swords and magic. He found out that he had an affinity to spatial magic. Author's note: -MC will be powerful but not a one man army. -MC's Masked Phantom persona fighting style is inspired from the Fourth Hokage of Naruto -Other characters will have their time to shine -MC has a rival, yes -Character developments are present -Interested in Pokemon fanfics? Do check out my other work, Pokemon: The Steel Tyrant43 Chs 154 Colecciones
this was a masterpiece of a chapter
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader