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not true
Nigel answered with a mental nod, "He is. He could be in your place right now, Master Harry. The boy who lived. Instead, both his parents were crazed by endless torture. Growing up with his grandmother and Uchle, in constant comparison to his father, and reprimand made him weak-willed and insecure. I don't know the source that spell is, though. Most intriguing."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
tbh it would be better this than the extra chapters on potions
Harry frowned as he recognized the name. "Nigel, isn't he the other baby in the prophecy?"
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
mr author is best if you used Mr. instead of sir
Harry, far from the shy boy he used to be, smiled amiably. "It's alright, Sir Weasley. I've gotten used to it," he replied, his tone light and devoid of any annoyance. The Harry of old might have shied away from such attention, but he had grown, both in confidence and in his understanding of the wizarding world.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
probably thebauthor meant Mr
Harry, far from the shy boy he used to be, smiled amiably. "It's alright, Sir Weasley. I've gotten used to it," he replied, his tone light and devoid of any annoyance. The Harry of old might have shied away from such attention, but he had grown, both in confidence and in his understanding of the wizarding world.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
Why would he need a room to experiment with the virtual room he has
As Misty busied herself with the task, Harry considered the new possibilities these rooms opened up. The study would be his sanctuary for learning and refining his magical skills, a place where he could delve into hardback books for a change. The workshop, on the other hand, would be a haven for practical application, where he could experiment and innovate, crafting potions and magical items.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
Truly it is stupid for him to buy spells with an Ai that should know there I a chance to find these spells in books that he could buy with galleons thus saving shop points for thins he cannot get in real life with gold like the talents… this is why I hate stories with systems and shops
"Let's go with the Disarming Charm from Charms. It's a dual-purpose spell, useful in both defense and dueling," Harry decided, deducting 30 points for the purchase.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
It is over dramatic and it is getting heavy with how much attention is being put on this 23 chapters truly tiring
Petunia's voice broke as she finished reading the letter. The room was thick with emotion, the silence punctuated only by the soft rustling of the paper in her hands. Harry, who had been listening intently, felt a knot form in his throat. The letter had revealed a side of his mother he had never known – a woman torn between her magical destiny and her love for her sister.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
These comments are irksome even more when every time you author have to describe the connotation of what the Ai say despite it being evident except for when you think your Ai is being humourous but it is not
As Harry obediently turned to the dishes, Nigel's voice echoed in his mind, a blend of caution and sly encouragement. "Well done, Master Harry. But tread carefully. You've opened a door, but pushing too hard could see it slammed shut in your face."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
Hope author wont have him be a meek servant even after petunia start to dip in the potter money
Harry's heart raced with excitement, but he knew better than to show it. "Enough of that," Petunia cut him off sharply, reverting to her usual stern demeanor. "Finish the dishes and get to your room." Her voice was firm, leaving no room for further discussion.
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
If the author gave the Ai actual humor🙃 , pretty much everything Nigel say is dry humor or humorous according to the author even when it is evidently not
"Ah, delving into the annals of our world, are we? A prudent choice, Master Harry," Nigel's voice echoed in his mind, laced with a dry humor that belied the seriousness of their endeavor. "Remember, knowledge is power, particularly when navigating the murky waters of familial reconciliation."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
I hope he will become a seeker with huffepuff… that house would be perfect to avoid attention and getting/reducing direct hostility from “snakes” and Snape, getting understimated and maybe getting close to Tonks
Nigel's voice, a blend of amusement and strategy, whispered in Harry's mind. "Well, well, Master Harry, dodging the bludgers with the grace of a Seeker. Redirect, deflect, and keep the snitch in sight."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
Hope you stop with always writing about the Ai dry humor every time it speaks even more so when he does not even use humor
Nigel, ever present in Harry's mind, chimed in with his usual dry humor. "A delicate situation indeed, Master Harry. Treading lightly is wise, but perhaps consider this an opportune moment to test your newfound skills. A little magical nudge might just keep your aunt in her slumber."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
With this beautiful version of Petunia it would be ok lol
"In essence, yes," Nigel confirmed. "It's about finding a common interest, a platform for positive interaction. It's not just about Dudley, it's about changing the dynamics of your relationship with the Dursleys."
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod
you know author, sarcasm is not this
"You have some secrets, I like that, maybe in the future you could even take the glass recipe from Myr... It would be quite useful to buy cheaper glass than to buy from Essos, I believe," Olenna spoke again, not without her usual sarcasm.
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Tbh it is forced saying he need to buy from Westeros when Essos would brought less issues
"Seryna. I want you to avoid any master who tries to approach you. If someone tries to do that, let me know. Don't let anyone get close and don't consume anything that isn't prepared by our men. These guys are plotting something and I don't like it at all." Jon spoke despite this, he still had to open his trade with the nobles and buy resources that only the Reach could provide him. Jon had spoken with a bit of anger, after all, all their actions made him distrust them, and it seemed they had malevolent intentions.
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Tsunade big heart heir lol at least in the art of the manga lol
At the end of the day, they decided to give the fruit to Samui for the simple reason that Karui had a decade less experience in comparison, and Samui's personality would allow her to flexibly use the ability, seizing any stealthy opportunities that arose.
Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras
Not truly , every country has something called states secrets and if you try to discover them without permission you will end up badly
"Yeah..." Saul was left speechless. After hearing this Celestial Dragon's questions, he suddenly felt like the Ohara scholars were digging their own graves.
One Piece: I am Imu
Anime & Comics · TitoVillar
what a waste
Am I applying sunscreen or giving you an oil massage?
Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras
I was that reader...I am.happy I made yhe comment
(This was requested by someone and I ran away with the idea after having a wild idea for a sequel following Aerion's Son in the future. If that reader did not make that comment, this fic would have ended around chapters 60-70 after some R18s with my favorite Targaryen girls which was the main point of this Fan Fic.)
GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
it is ridicoulous author you mentioned being cautious of dumbledore and then you send mc to the house where he would attract his attention even more
Harry's smirk deepened. "Don't you want to see the old man's face when you put me there?"
Harry Potter with Technology System
Book&Literature · TheFanficGod