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Original: https://www.lightnovelworld.co/novel/fated-to-be-loved-by-villains-1664/chapter-23 https://www.lightnovelworld.co/novel/fated-to-be-loved-by-villains-1664/chapter-23

The MC seems pretty empty, it seems more like a self-insert where the author tries to make the protagonist look cool in a very stupid way (by making it as emo, rude and insulting as possible and without giving a good justification for it), I don't have I have no idea what the MC is complaining about, he is not the Kiba Yuto who, according to Rias, let him die to revive him later, that is, YOU LITERALLY DIED AND THEY REVIVED YOU (here the MC took something from the Incredibles movie, in one part he says "I don't I asked to be revived", something very similar to the "you didn't save my life, you ruined my death" from the movie"), THEY GIVE YOU FREE ACCOMMODATION, FOOD AND TRAINING, and you only have to temporarily act as a glorified bodyguard of the person who decided to save you , but all it does in each chapter is emphasize how stupid and lazy rias is.

you said that the plot is not poorly explained because: “you are expected to know the story to a certain point when you read a fanfic” and then you wrote “it is one of the main points when you read a fanfic, to go through the story from a different point or perspective.” ", I think that because it is a fanfic (and one that changes practically all the characters as well as adding others from OTHER FRANCHISES) and is telling the story from a different point, it needs to improve and be able to better explain the plot , because honestly the MC seems quite hollow, it seems more like a self-insertion in which the author tries to make the protagonist look great in a very stupid way (by doing the most emo, rude and insulting thing possible and not giving a good justification for that ).

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I'm still waiting for a new novel from you!

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