Webnovel Author: Poison_Tester - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Clutch for giving us the og title saved me a bit of time thank you!

(TLDR) Overall a promising fanfic a quick read is definitely deserved. The quality of the writing is 4/5. Readable fs; just slight grammar mistakes here and there but you can get immersed in the book. Stability of the updates seems good for now so 5/5. The Development of the story is quite interesting. It has the same system as "The Lords Coins Aren't Decreasing". The author fits it very well into the story kudos to that. Also the crossover with Naruto and other realms are quite good as well. Dialogue is funny and nice to read. Story progression isn't very slow nor too fast its just right. The story development seems promising 4/5. The main character is also someone quite relatable and acts as a normal person. He's an enjoyable character to read about. 4/5 The world background gets a 5/5. Quite literally the multiverse and you can't get much better then that. Also MHA is the actual setting but the system opens up the possibility of world hopping. But maybe it will be just MHA and even then the realism with the story is decent. 3/5 (Review written at ten chapters published.)

(I used google) This is the worst HOTD story I've ever read! The protagonist has minimal participation in the story and is constantly humiliated by his own family and especially by Viserys who stole his right to inherit the throne with a cheap excuse that increases the chance of usurpation in the family, but in fact it is just the author simply keeping the story the same as canon. All this makes no sense, to solve the problem it was just to have married Mc to Rhaenyra. In addition to being exiled and usurped, the Mc still kneels to Rhaenyra. Probably in the future Daemon will marry Daemon and the protagonist will be ignored again. Remembering he is the Mc of this story and even so he is the least present character. Worst of all is the lack of reaction from Mc who accepts everything without rebelling or at least contesting it.

So far the the story meshes together very well without any grammatical errors to disturb your immersion of the book itself. (4 stars) Stability of updates is unknown at this time due to this review being written while the story only has 3 chapters. (1 star) The story is clearly setting up the foundations for the future for a darker toned story (the tags helped as well) in the world of Harry Potter. The introduction of a semi crazy scientist in chapter 3 either suggests he is going to be experimented on or something else but who knows? Some of the things I liked so far is the mystery, the immediate introduction of OC's, and the small cliches that aren't all too bad. (4 stars) The Main character himself is still a mystery; with not much of his past getting talked about and not much about himself as he has mainly been focusing on surviving so far. (1 stars) I love Harry Potter and I do enjoy reading books about it. (5 stars) But to be honest I've read this authors previous book "The Wizard called Oz" and the rewrite " Harry Potter and the descendant of Merlin". Both were very good compared to the usual on this site so I have high hopes for this book but no pressure and I hope the author enjoys writing this book!

Writing Quality- Doesn't really make the reader invested into the story. 3/5 Updates- Seems solid for now but too few chapters to tell. 5/5 Story- Very similar to most Harry Potter fanfictions and doesn't have anything unique to make it stand out truly. 2/5 MC- Not seeing anything unique still sadly. But again too few chapters to tell for now. 2/5 World Background- It's Harry Potter. 3/5 I wouldn't really say this is a must read but if you have some free time I would say check this book out. Overall 3/5.

Amazing story. Writing quality- I didn't see any mistakes but maybe there were some that I missed so 4/5. Stability of Updates- I am unsure because I just found this gem but it has 16 chapters so 5/5 for now. Story Development- I love how this story is going so far. Short world hops that don't make the story boring. Character Design- He is pretty much my favorite type of mc. OP but not boring. World Background- Multiple worlds so far. We have I think a original world, Naruto, Highschool DxD, and DBZ, and more to come I think. Overall a 4.8/5 for me. I hope author continues to write this amazing story. Its been a while since I've found a story on Webnovel like this.