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This was a great find. The story seems to be paced at just the right speed and side characters are properly developed without detracting from the main story. One might say that the romance aspect is a bit rush but I have seen faster paced relationships in real life. All in all I am checking my phone every morning for an update. Keep up the good work.

This story reads like a catchy pop song that you are hearing for the first time. The author has created a wonderful story that has so much plot potential. As I am reading I am constantly trying to guess which way the story is going to go and am surprised again and again. This author has taken the time to properly fill in the story with descripted writing allowing the reader to be fully immersed into the story. I am further impressed with how well side characters are being develop without slowing down the plot. This story is by far one of the better works on this site and I look forward to reading more.