Estou tentando, primeira vez que escrevo algo, vou me esforçar para melhorar.
ch 0 1 Capitulo 1: Desafios na Megalópole
Games · BrazilianGoodGuy
changes were made? do i need to reread?
ch 20 Chapter 20_ Sword Saint (2)
Others · Unleashed_Echo
Great story so far. Please dont drop
ch 41 Iron's breefing
Games · Stupendous_Steph
Not that Zach hasn't played against strong teams before... It doesn't make sense that his A+ dribbling skills are below average. As the system is quantifiable it knows exactly your skill level and there is no reason to lack confidence when all your skills are above A+ (assuming the sport's peak peak is probably S+)
ch 441 A Costly Mistake
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
The problem with this argument is that Zachary has visible ways of figuring out how he's going to perform, the system doesn't show any statistics really bad enough to lack confidence, and I lack the ability to be able to see the "level" of other players.
ch 433 Pre-Season Tour Starts
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
I would love to see Zach in a special cup card in FIFA Ultimate Team (I think it was already known this year).
ch 371 Eve of the Europa League Semi-Final
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Atlético de Madrid is a good option between 2014-2016, in addition to the good campaigns in the Champions, he will have the rivalry with Messi and Ronaldo at his peak. In the Premier League, Tottenham and Liverpool would be good options.
ch 362 Interested Clubs
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
only in the united states "soccer" is different from "football", in the rest of the world we call yours american football. (at least for me)
ch 335 Second-Minute Shocker
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Hello, the application does not have a translation option, we use the browser's own translation option, I noticed that it was only in the last chapters of your book (316 onwards) that you have this error.
ch 318 A Missile to Reignite the Spirit of the Team
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
I like the novel so much that I had to use the google translator on my cell phone camera to read this, is webnovel wanting to reduce its users by putting translation blocking?
ch 318 A Missile to Reignite the Spirit of the Team
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Estou perdido, por que ele sabe os eventos futuros até 2021??
ch 21 Chapter 21: Cause and Effect
Sports · Gomatsu_Gomatsu
Thanks for the chapters
ch 125 The Dangerous Substitute I
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
I'm disappointed...
ch 115 The Pre-Match Tactical Briefings
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Sério cara, eu não sou um grande fã de ler sobre as partidas... mas essa esta demorando tanto que estou pensando seriamente em parar de ler se no proximo capítulo ele não tiver pelomenos o primeiro tempo.
ch 114 The Pre-Match Dynamic Warm-Up
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 114 The Pre-Match Dynamic Warm-Up
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Xp
ch 242 There’s No Surrendering In This Match
Games · MyLittleBrother
I really don't understand why so much work if you have almost 20 people who could ALONE win this "war", it wasn't exactly clear if the whole guild goes to the bigger world, because if not everyone there's no point in him creating a guild and recruiting random people, at this point in the story with so much that has already happened the plot should be completely different from the original, I think the author has the ability to distance himself from what LOC has already written and still be good and cohesive. Sorry for the rant, but it was making me sleepy rereading something I've already read but under completely different circumstances.
ch 34 Killing Spree (1)
Reincarnation of the strongest sword god-reincarnating once more
Others · DunnoDK