Spencer_Jones_2771

Spencer_Jones_2771

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2019-08-20 Se unió United States
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Spencer_Jones_2771
2 years ago
Posted

This is actually a really good story, and I have enjoyed it so far. The story is fun and pretty well written. But it’s called Summoner System and the MC hasn’t summoned anything. it’s a monster tamer system. It’s like calling Ash from Pokémon a summoner. Just kind of disappointing.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

So you are telling me that MC is weaker phisically than the average person, but weilding a giant iron bar as a spear with no difficulty? I’m going to go ahead and call BS. 0% chance he could actually use it. I love that he chose the spear, it was the most widely used weapon in the Middle Ages for a reason. It also had a wooden haft for a reason. A fully iron spear would be so heavy and unweildy that it would be impossible for him to use.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

Author is still active on here but i guess he dropped the book. Maybe he has told people who bought the last 2 chapters? Be nIce if he would communicate to the people who don’t have those chapters though. Especially since it would take him literally 10 seconds to comment on this chapter and let us know.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

Yeah, There being no consequences for him using magic and no concession from the people who broght him is dumb af and totally inconsistent with the grandfathers personality so far.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

One question. Nygard uses a spell and you call it a sacrificIal spell, but what does he sacrifice? Nothing is ever mentioned. I mean if he pulled out a diamond or void crystals, and they crumbled to dust after he cast the spell then the name would fit better.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

The math that the author uses gives me a headache. Something is at level 1 and he adds 5 points to it and it goes to level 5. Something is at level 3 and he adds 2 points to it and it goes to level 5. So really the stuff that shows as level 1 should be level 0. So to simplify 1+5=6 0+5=5

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Posted

This story is the very definotIon of telling and not showing. The story itself seems like it could be interesting, but the quality of writing is just not there. There is no substance to the writing, no real descriptions of what is going on.

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
3 years ago
Commented

This seems lIke an okay story, but it needs a lot of work on the editing side. Now that I am to the premium chapters i probably won’t continue to read. I am not going to spend money/coins on a book of this quality and I already have a book I am using my passes on. Maybe once I finish the book I am reading now I’ll come back to this one.

Spencer_Jones_2771
Spencer_Jones_2771
4 years ago
Replied to ByDevon

Just wanted to let you know they book is on Amazon under the tItle Cheater’s Game By Damon Bell. Not sure if you put it there or not but a lot of books from here are getting plagiarize