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So you are telling me that MC is weaker phisically than the average person, but weilding a giant iron bar as a spear with no difficulty? I’m going to go ahead and call BS. 0% chance he could actually use it. I love that he chose the spear, it was the most widely used weapon in the Middle Ages for a reason. It also had a wooden haft for a reason. A fully iron spear would be so heavy and unweildy that it would be impossible for him to use.

Author is still active on here but i guess he dropped the book. Maybe he has told people who bought the last 2 chapters? Be nIce if he would communicate to the people who don’t have those chapters though. Especially since it would take him literally 10 seconds to comment on this chapter and let us know.

Yeah, There being no consequences for him using magic and no concession from the people who broght him is dumb af and totally inconsistent with the grandfathers personality so far.

One question. Nygard uses a spell and you call it a sacrificIal spell, but what does he sacrifice? Nothing is ever mentioned. I mean if he pulled out a diamond or void crystals, and they crumbled to dust after he cast the spell then the name would fit better.

The math that the author uses gives me a headache. Something is at level 1 and he adds 5 points to it and it goes to level 5. Something is at level 3 and he adds 2 points to it and it goes to level 5. So really the stuff that shows as level 1 should be level 0. So to simplify 1+5=6 0+5=5

This seems lIke an okay story, but it needs a lot of work on the editing side. Now that I am to the premium chapters i probably won’t continue to read. I am not going to spend money/coins on a book of this quality and I already have a book I am using my passes on. Maybe once I finish the book I am reading now I’ll come back to this one.