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2019-08-22 Se unió Global

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Kotik_Kotik
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would affected -->would be affected

This was not just about their lives and their survival, but also their business. if something happened during the Pythian games, a lot of people would affected, not just Urthans. They had high-ranking guests from nobility all across the Pathworks in the audience, in addition to the contestants in the artist categories who were all widely known and influential.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

lies-->lay

As for the reason he was suddenly trapped with work when he was supposed to enjoy a great event like this lies in what happened a few days prior...

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

AM r-->Mar

Although the great empires had a treaty against the use of Legends in new worlds, not everyone had signed it. Independent legends or creatures from the Pathworks could see it as a chance for conquest... He invested quite a bit into Minas AM r and had made a good profit on the Tower Masters purchases and sales. It would have been a shame to lose them.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

strokes -->stroked

The time was finally here, the Pythian game would happen soon. His withered, cold hand strokes the grimoire in his arms. The first attempt was a failure, but he still had their support. With the materials they gave him, he would be able to finally do it.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

Amr-->mar

"You have to think of Minas Mar more as a gated community than a district. What we do is offer a safe living environment to the people, in exchange we require rent. Minas Amr has no centralized governance; each Tree Station is self-governing in nature.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

truing -->trying

Any who wished to come were allowed, whether they be man or woman, adult or child, human or beast. The monument alone will be the judge of who is worthy of its legacy. If any dared to stop or bar entry of others from trying, they would forever be disqualified from truing.

The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Kotik_Kotik
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Seth had no idea what the rules were. Why did the stamina geass apply to the user, but the invisibility applied to the ring? How did that translate?! If even there were uses for a ring that could become invisible, what was the point if it would actively try to become lost and eventually find a new owner? Seth decided not to bother with it.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

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Seth had no idea what the rules were. Why did the stamina geass apply to the user, but the invisibility applied to the ring? How did that translate?! If even there were uses for a ring that could become invisible, what was the point if it would actively try to become lost and eventually find a new owner? Seth decided not to bother with it.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

they-->we

"We are not afraid of such things, as they are not truly alive ourselves. Also, Minas Mar has a deal with the inhabitants of that land, so there is no need to worry," the Golem Knight explained elaborately. Although his speech was slightly hacked off, there was no hindrance to understanding it.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

now-->not

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The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

had-->hard

But for now, he had more important work. With Dig's soul refined, he could start forging it into a mirror image of his Lucky Trinket. That was not had, since it was a simple ring with only a small stone set at the top. What he had to mentally prepare for was the enchanting.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

by-->by hand

Unfortunately, he also couldn't use the method of suppressing the original ego with the automaton core circuit. From experience he knew, that he would need the space for the Blessing of Hades. This only left doing it by and or Soul Refinery goes -brrrrr

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

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The hairy beast was called a Troll, which confused Seth a little, but he accepted that it was probably Urth's version of one. The soul's description called it a crude and violent beast, fitting most trolls he knew. The troll's geass was a 90% immunity to physical damage, but in exchange, it would turn into brittle stone under the direct sunlight.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

go-->goo

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The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_Kotik
Commented

bro didn't notice the praying mantis nor the oriole

"You still don't get it. It's Householder's Rights," the bard whispered into his ear, before tightening his grip. When the cicada fell silent, he threw the unconscious cultivator covered in severe burns, into the middle of the room, for all the defiant watchers to see.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_Kotik
Commented

a group -->by a group

He was not the only one who had his eyes on the funny group of friends, openly showing the prosperity of Minas Mar. As he was watching, there was a young man approaching the group. He was handsome, clad in expensive, high-quality robes, and surrounded a group of sycophants.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

piece-->peace

The mortals of the land were not prepared for monsters, invaders, or divine beasts suddenly appearing outside of dangerous regions. The piece of the mainland that had been kept for millennia was broken as otherworldly beasts traveled through the land, marauding and looting.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik
Commented

hat-->had

Was this a peculiarity of their world? Seth had heard about it in Ora, oftentimes worlds hat their own system of magic or style of mana usage. The materials at the tower of Willis were a good example.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

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