Commenting and writing are my hobbies. Also part of the grammar police, so beware ! :3
2019-10-11 Se unió Global
No way you read it all again…. did you?
ch 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely
Fantasy · SolAce
No problem, sorry I couldn’t read yours more…. time is literally sand rn
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Fantasy · Houraji
spewing* the white crystals….and piling* (almost like a compound verb after “by”) Or spewing* the white crystals from the grey cloudy sky, which* piled up
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Fantasy · Houraji
those spoke* of white* rather than “those were speak for white”
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Fantasy · Houraji
Not gonna lie, Kain is acting rather humble here. Does he respect Damien already?
A rowdy bang comes from a glass door, as Kain slowly approaches the doorway. "Oo! Damien, so glad you could make it to my humble estate on this ravishing afternoon," Kain exclaims in pleasantry, after opening the doorway.
Fantasy · JacksNovels
Because behind that hideous figure lied a past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose.* This is what I think you meant to say, and the reason for no comma is because you can reverse the latter part with the beginning. Ex) A past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose lied behind that hideous figure.
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Fantasy · Houraji
Doing alright, still drowning in studies
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Fantasy · Houraji
Hmm, an easy death to be fair. Not sure if a person would even feel pain because of the initial shock
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Fantasy · Houraji
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 Moonlight Rendezvous
Fantasy · Houraji
There’s no way this Darius would cheat later, right ?
"Robin Hood," Yu Pengkai and Darius declared in perfect unison, their voices overlapping one another's.
Games · Tangerqueen
Welcome back! Glad to see you updating again
ch 23 Counters and Bans
Games · Tangerqueen
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 23 Counters and Bans
Games · Tangerqueen
Heh, exactly! College is an experience I’ll never forget, might as well make it into a happy one. (`・∀・´) And the same goes for you, I hope college life won’t be too stressful and be smooth sailing. On the other hand, I look forward to the day when we can both finish our books. (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾ See you again soon!
ch 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely
Fantasy · SolAce
May or may not have taken some scenes out
I've managed to rewrite the first 5-6 chapters up to now, but I still have to do 16 more chapters, not including the new chapters that I have to plan. Hence, for the readers who were still keeping this lazy author's work in the library, I'm so sorry.
Fantasy · SolAce
Not to worry xD I’m meandering throughout life rn; time to write is getting squeezed thin
ch 22 Another Dream
Fantasy · SolAce
Ahem, seems like I have to improve my transitions
Another Dream
Fantasy · SolAce
Kudos…but with a lot of ‘whys’ I barely did anything
ch 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely
Memories Like a Dagger
Fantasy · SolAce