kfdao

1yr

Posted

story is good but instead using literal translations they could use pokemon names to make the story flow more smoothly. it frustrating that they use literal translations and Chang how they describe the pokemon six times per paragraph it seems

Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)

Anime & Comics · FebyFeb

kfdao

1yr

Commented

gun stupid. literal translations are really annoying

ch 65 Chapter 65 Gun?

Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)

Anime & Comics · FebyFeb

kfdao

1yr

Commented

just call it krabby or Kingler please and thank you. no need for literal translation

ch 59 Chapter 59 The wind and rain are coming

Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)

Anime & Comics · FebyFeb

kfdao

1yr

Commented

Mr author please stop wasting word counts with your notes being as long as a chapter. if you need tonsay something please prepare a separate chapter for it

ch 228 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 228

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

kfdao

1yr

Commented

feels like the systems getting too involved in the story

ch 11 The Rookie Tournament 1 (Edited)

Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

kfdao

1yr

Commented

the emotion cons are a annoying and break story flow

ch 23 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 23

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

kfdao

1yr

Posted

this story has good character development and world background setting. The story though does not develop at all. Author said slow but so far no real story. It just repeats the same slice of life arc over and over in different settings no real adventure and no focus on pokemon

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

kfdao

3yr

Commented

well that is one heck of a start

ch 0 1 Being carried

The Evil Consort Above An Evil King

Fantasy · Mu Danfeng

kfdao

3yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 0 1 The Beginning Of a Legendary Journey

Agatha The Legendary Guild Master

Fantasy · ranmaro

kfdao

3yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 0 1 Campus that turned into a hell (1)

Only I Am a Necromancer

Fantasy · Jijumjang

kfdao

3yr

Commented

seems interesting

Este libro ha sido eliminado.

kfdao

3yr

Posted

good story. good story flow. good characters. interesting concept. has me hooked from first chapterwish to see more character progression. hope story keeps going