Rajendra_Prasad_3537

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2020-02-19 Se unió Global
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Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 months ago
Posted

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 months ago
Posted

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

Raw Raw is there a raw raw raw raw raw raw

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

Seriously the chapter length is so low and is irritating to spend spend coins for such a low wording chapter

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

It's a outright plagiarism which is really appalling, don't read it it's not worth it

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

The story is bloody without conviction no development of characters boring screenplay.

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

The main character fade is having psychological troubles he should be determined not some dipshit who was clumsy in his decisions he should learn more about the world and learn to adapt to it not only he is only improvising things which is clumsy and stupid. As a assassin he should be ruthless but not only he is wishy washy it is completely idiotic.

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

the story plot is average, full of narration and less dialogue but a good attempt.

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Commented

please change the spelling from fond to found

Rajendra_Prasad_3537
Rajendra_Prasad_3537
1 years ago
Posted

nice story development and rich world experience