The storytelling is done very well, and everything really comes to life! The character's backstory and origin story make this a much more believable read. The writing quality is amazing, but there are the occasional grammar mistakes, but given the number of updates this has, I'd say it's not too big of an issue. Good job author! :)
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"Honey…" Kael tried to get a hold of her but she stood up and watched as he tried to get up. Jane grabbed her phone and said, "Mission accomplished. Put the money in my bank account, we're done here."
Lumia: Other World
Fantasía · Mel_Aniv
Cheng Lei was Navier's original name. It seems like I forgot to change his name in this chapter :/ so thanks for pointing it out!
Thank you so much for the support! It means so much to me! T-T <33
True true! But then again, the overarching mission is to kill him... There are definitely (a lot) of plot holes. This is the first novel I've ever written, so bear with me :)
The school bell rang, signaling the end of the day. Joan had hardly been there for four hours, but her legs tingled from sitting in the same seat for all those hours. The backs of her legs were uncomfortably warm, and sweat made her pants stick to her thighs.
Project: Kill
Urbano · myona_
Thanks for pointing that out! Didn't notice!
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Project: Kill
Urbano · myona_
Thank you so much for the support! It means a lot!
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original Project: Kill
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Year: 2123 Joan Oaks is the first genetically engineered superhuman with overwhelming strength, cognitive abilities, agility, and adaptability. But she has a heart of steel. As a mere tool for the government, she’s lost her ability to feel emotions. For her final mission, she’s sent back 50 years earlier to 2073, 4 years before the existence of superhumans. Her mission: kill her creator. *Cover art does not belong to me. All credit goes to original artist*65 Chs 397 Colecciones
Haha, I can totally relate. The idea behind it actually came from a K-drama where something similar happened (don't remember the name, sadly). Similar premise where someone's body becomes unidentifiable, and they're mistaken for another person.
Imposter!
Adolescente · myona_