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The story is really interesting, I was even thinking about leaving a review, but using a word count to appear in the ranking is a very poor decision.

If you want to turn off your brain you could watch: Step Brothers Borat Naked gun Anchorman Elf Napoleon Dynamite Austin Powers Hot Fuzz The Mask My favorite movie of all time its Leon the professional

No chap?? Today

I really hope this is the original author "Writing for improvement"...

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I'm here once again, Aaron Glassman it's from the good doctor. EXTRAORDINARY chapter.

Right now I'm basically Sherlock Holmes, the new characters are: Obviously Ellis Gray from Grey's Anatomy. And now I would like to explain my deduction method (nonsense but it worked): I would like to say that I know the way you write since I am, without fear of being wrong, your first reader. I like to think that you watch the series/movies over and over again making notes to later add it or not to your novel and among those things you use these means for the development of the story (obviously). When you started writing about American football, you asked for references to movies on the subject, explaining that you were not a fan and therefore needed help. Taking these last points into account, I thought, if the "second volume" was the MC in medical school, what would MaximusQuill do? obviously see topic content. Thus my search began. Dr. Josef Eaton who has the name of an amalgam between the name of the actor and the name of the character, Josef Sommer and Dr. Eaton respectively. Now the next name, Doctor Titan, is not, as in the previous case, an amalgam, the actor is Richard Kiley, not Frederick, but there is a character called Doctor Titan in the same film. These two new characters are from the 1998 Patch Adams movie. I appreciate the applause.

You need to work a lot in the paragraph structure, it's difficult to read a big block of text.

Unfortunately I read the chapter a little late, but here is what I think (great chapter, by the way): you are building what to me seems something quite obvious but well chosen, knowing you and your way of writing, you plan to have some kind of conflict for which you call your second volume, which is again, a great choice, then you're building MC connections with important characters for the next part of your MC's life. Doctor Thomas is obviously a bridge to many things, including a way of conflict resolution in the medical world and connections with other characters, House is obviously not the only important character who was at one time under the wings of Doctor Thomas. I am almost completely sure that we will meet Ellis Grey in any of the next chapters, perhaps more characters and all thanks to Dr. Thomas. Also something else that I notice is the way in which PJ treats "fame" I can see how you are going to "torture" your MC with more of what he seeks to avoid, I theorize that you will use the attacks to give much more public attention no desired by the MC. I hope it is not by avoiding it (obviously it is a tragedy and like any tragedy we cannot deny that many wish it had not happened) but by participating in collective efforts to help.

Good chapter.

You also have the audacity to try and charge for something that it's already fee on the internet, how lame.

I was just checking "your" other works, obviously this one is also plagiarized, original work "Dark Lord Rising" by AndrewQuill. "I love to write" Yeah sure...

Found it, "Reborn" by JustBored21, not your work, stop plagiarizing.

I have definitely read this before... Give credit.