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Is this turning into a 18+ story? 🤔🤨

Try your hand at making a Pokémon or Yu-Gi-Oh story 🙂 I bet you would make great one's if the series interests you!

Please continue 🥺

Bro what even is this anymore?? Are you ever going to focus on the main character rather than glaze the Fourth Hokage and his wife every chapter? 0 character development so far

Who the heck is Hinome and why waste time on her??

Worst shipping. 🖕

EXCITED TO SEE YOU MAKE MORE BATTLE SCENES. 🐐

So are you bruh

Thank god. Being in the DxD universe that long was probably rotting your brain, Author.

I like glasses on any girl but Sona is just not the first choice I'd go. Not even that great of a personality either for it to justify picking someone that looks like an undeveloped Middle Schooler bro

Sona = MID.

It has become a bit monotonous, There's no exciting feeling I get like when I first found your story and read it for the first time, I wish you could have made his adventure more exciting or at least focus more on him so I don't feel so distant from the main character, it doesn't help I hate his wife 😅

Pov: YOU

Boi, why are you up this late?

Hephaestus is more overrated as a FL in my opinion with my experience in these kinds of stories. Tied with Hestia

Wow my words completely flew over your head, I already know all of that. I'm just genuinely wondering how he hasn't kicked the bucket yet. That's it lol

Professional yapper

Why is Mizuki still being brought up? I thought he was dead ages ago. Author,what are you doing to your story? It doesn't feel like I'm reading the story I read in the past that I enjoyed