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Frogtank

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I exist to read books and look at frogs. admin pls ad website night mode. if you are an artist that I have used art form, contact me at frogtank123@gmail.com

2020-12-31 Se unió Global

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Frogtank
Frogtank
Replied to Demiurge666

yea, but even a smut story needs to advance somewhere, somehow. without that, its just words. plus this has a story, and the smut is actively making it worse. during the date with the duchess, it would have been better if the only smut that happened was with the duchess herself, instead of with everybody Astra saw.

Besides that, this upcoming Saturday I leave for vacation for a little over a week, so uploads for this aren't guaranteed daily, just as a heads up; if they are, it'll be 'fluff' or relatively non smutty things focusing on other important things happening, so there's that.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Frogtank
Commented

thank god. you need to reduce the amount of smut in this book so that the story can actually go somewhere.

Besides that, this upcoming Saturday I leave for vacation for a little over a week, so uploads for this aren't guaranteed daily, just as a heads up; if they are, it'll be 'fluff' or relatively non smutty things focusing on other important things happening, so there's that.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Commented

were is number 2?

ch 26 A God’s Eternal Plan (3)

Am I Lewd Enough??

Am I Lewd Enough??

Fantasy · Norobo

Frogtank
Commented

that is the worst you can do for foreshadowing.

His mother was the first to break the silence. She immediately ran up to her, hugging her, kissing her on the cheek and praising her with him and his father joining along the way but of course, Elm's expression never changed. In such a heart-warming moment, Willow had failed to realize that the dread he had casted aside would be the shortcoming that led to his downfall.

Am I Lewd Enough??

Am I Lewd Enough??

Fantasy · Norobo

Frogtank
Replied to Tvv

thats what steroids are for.

He knew that tomorrow, everything would change and there was nothing he could do about it. But as tomorrow would be the end, it would also be a new beginning for Willow. That was if his plan worked.

Am I Lewd Enough??

Am I Lewd Enough??

Fantasy · Norobo

Frogtank
Replied to Greeninja4448

full steel plate armor weighs 50-60 pounds. you think a femboy who is too stupid to train in 15 years is gonna be able to wear that?

Elm had the same clouded expression in her eyes but this time, he thought he saw a trace of worry in them. "This is the fifth time you've been assaulted by a monster, brother. Something tells me there's going to be a sixth. A seventh. And, an eight."

Am I Lewd Enough??

Am I Lewd Enough??

Fantasy · Norobo

Frogtank
Replied to Nobe_Soen

each year there is equivalent to 2 here, and every thing seems to grow faster, but yea, its a little weird.

That made Dama look away for a moment before she quietly said "I believe it was 10 and 8 respectively..? And we have no idea how old Astra might be, just that she can only remember things from a few months ago, around mid Autumn."

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Posted

this review is written as of 4/14/2024, with chapter 489 being the latest chapter. Spoiler free review/ TLDR: the good: 1- the mythology you have created for this world is very entertaining and good. 2- the 18+ scenes are written very well 3- the story so far has hooked me the bad: 1- some of the characters are shallow 2- the story is moving at a slow pace 3- there is too many 18+ scenes. they get in the way of the story, and are used so much they have become stale and tedious to read. a book should never be tedious. the story would benefit from a 50% reduction to 18+ scenes. Long version, with story spoilers the good: the mythology is extremely good and entertaining. it fleshes out the world and emulates real world patterns of mythos very well, giving explanations to things that are unexplainable to people of medieval technological stage. The stories give character to the powers above in this world, and develops a path towards understanding and empathy with entity that are shown to actually exist and interact with mortals. the 18+ scenes are written well. in some cases they are used as slice of life fillers, and in others as tools to advance the story and developed character. this diversity helps keep new characters fresh and improve the flaws of existing ones. the story so far has been entertaining, with interesting plot points, and the seeds of massive events sowed. The bad: Some of the characters are shallow and under used. You wrote an entire 60+ chapters dedicated to buying the lamia girl, yet barley use her in any way. her entire personality is "snake girl, slave, can brew poisons". there is nothing else there. The story is moving at a very slow pace, and this is because of the absurd amount of 18+ scenes. It is extremely irritating to be interested in what story beat is going on, only for it to be interrupted with another version of "Astra was horny" and then 2000 words of sex. You are overusing sex scenes, and it is actively harming the story. whats going on with the ritual shop that was hidden by magic? its been nearly 100 chapters since it was mentioned. The worst hit by this is Astra's date with the duchess. I think it was actively harmed by the inclusion of sex scenes throughout the date. It would have been more impactful and emotional if they didn't happen. The story would benefit from reducing the amount of 18+ scenes by 50% or more. it would allow for more of the story to advance, while keeping sex scenes more fresh because there wouldn't be 10 strait chapters of them.

Frogtank
Replied to Darkxion5455

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That was certainly not meant for young children, despite it dancing around everything in the ending... It was quite clearly a smut story through and through!

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to benihaniman

Death

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When I decided to get up, I had to tug the kit off my chest and raise a brow at her, tapping her nose and pushing her head back a little, ignoring the pout and whine that she gave me as I pulled my dress back over my tits and clothed myself.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to TheDark_King

and they can milk her like that guard did.

Aka grinned at me, before she hesitantly asked "And... And milk too, Mama? W-Will we get... milk?"

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to The_Scary1

if she managed to hit a 10% chance of failure 20 times in a row, which according to my (very bad) calculations, is a 1/5000 chance, i would pity her too.

[Determined Crafter : Failure doesn't deter you, and each failure increases your chance of completing and improving your work by 5% until it is made]

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to TheDark_King

the duchess already knows. she used truth magic when they first met, and she was clued in by it.

"No being forced into sex, no risk to my family, no risk to myself, guaranteed pay, set hours, and protection from you from the Nobility as long as it feels 'unwarranted'."

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to Darkxion5455

monster musume

Hanging above the door was a sign that read 'Suu's Love Nest', with a sloppily drawn birds wing.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to Lawson26

a fellow Sseth enjoyer, perchance?

35 Silvers later, Aethisia left with two small novellas; one was a children's book, something she bought as a way to teach written language and entertain her future child, while the other was a raunchy book about a Rancher breeding her farmhands one by one, each of them from a race with something valuable to sell that they grew on their bodies.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to ChaosCreat0r

gym rat 🫵

"Fuck me~! It's been a long~ time since I had a Rabbit~!"

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Commented

i like this one.

Draekai's work 'What Do You Mean There Are Other Transmigrators In My Harem Fantasy' and general Futanari doujins...

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

Frogtank
Replied to El_Pana_8944

i know the top is from redo of healer, but whats this one from?

The next morning I awoke with aching muscles and a warmth spreading throughout my two lower holes.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

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