That was a great police-thief chase.
ch 0 2 Volume 1. Chapter 2; Decryption
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal
Wow...
"FUCK!" The girl cried in shock as Liam's body hung lifeless out of the car, the blood spraying all over her and the front seat.
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal
Great start!
ch 0 1 Volume 1. Chapter 1; Severed limbs, Severing ties
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal
The fight was very short but still nice. The quibbles between Thorne and Galen is hilarious too.
ch 0 2 Danger in the Village
Fantasy · Malakai_Darkstar
Haha!
Galen chuckled at the spectacle unfolding before him, "Perhaps I've taken over part of your brain?" He continued making fun of Thorne, enjoying the chaos.
Fantasy · Malakai_Darkstar
Nice start!
ch 0 1 Extortion and Regret
Fantasy · Malakai_Darkstar
Didn't see that coming.
"Argh!" Sumei screamed, holding her left calf. An arrow had pierced her, and its tip was caked in green.
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
Nice chapter. Makes me eager to read the next chapter.
ch 0 3 Four Sides of Death
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
His family seems...
ch 0 2 Ex-Hunter Family
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
Haha!
"What are you looking at? Never seen a beauty like me before?" she snapped.
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
Only I level up is one of my best novels, so I look forward to this. Excellent start by the way.
ch 0 1 Truck Kun Sends Regards
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
Best advice you can get on this, as it comes directly from the queen of harem.
Jacob made his way across the class. He reached the most beautiful loli in the class, Sumei, who was surprisingly alone.
Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
Thank you.
Great story! The grammar is good and there are only a few mistakes in between. The author has done a great job of designing the characters. Our protagonist, Cade, is a guy who for the moment is struggling to make ends meet. The story only has three chapters published, so I can't say much about worldbuilding. All in all, it is a story with a lot of potential.
Shadows of Decryption; Secrets Unveiled
Sci-fi · Theothecolossal