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this is nice. would be cool if he started banging these girls occasionally.

The conversations are really chaotic.. Too many people talk in the same paragraph, and sometimes i don't know who says what. They also feel rushed.. would be nice to have a bit more narration added to.provide context between dialogues.

I wonder how MC will complete this quest with 10 weaklings.. He hasn't prepared anything yet... It honestly sounds absurd that this path was taken in the first place. I hope it will make some sense later.

His ascent as the Lord, idk about the fallen priestess thing.. Maybe she's set up and MC gets her, then helps her? Then he will go to western continent and become an SSS rank hero and get his item, then last book, he should have returned after Ye Liang k1lled him, but he changed the plot, so things will be different.

I wonder though..Is Yuena still with that man? I was kinda hoping for some good quality oyakodon, and Yuena seems like the perfect target.

Hmm.. For being able to fight High level epoch core Sect Master, MC sure struggled in this fight. Is there a need to make her appear weaker to create the illusion that Andrea, Cecile and Kali are equal? I think it's pretty obvious that she is the strongest at this moment, so there's no need to hold back for appearance sake. The sect master of a first rate power can't be average, and i don't believe anger makes one stronger like in cliche anime, so she should have had an easier time overall. I honestly hope there won't be any forced situations, like raising the girls at the expense of MC as it happened so far.

this was one of the most dragged out chapters.. Too many bloated descriptions that ruin the flow. Too much repetition while going in circles.. I swear, these char descriptions have been recycled every few chaps for hundreds of chaps. They are there to make up space by now.

These repetitions of 3 enumerations are becoming too repetitive. Feels like author got trapped in a bubble they can't escape with this style.

Angel is starting to become annoying. Is everyone going to ignore how she almost endangered the plan with her outburst? Or, just acting clingy like a 5 yr old kid is enough to ignore how spoiled and ignorant she is? I swear whatever she does is an excuse to act like a kid, and ignore the world. She had everything too easy and is never told off. That's a toxic way of bringing up someone.

Hmm..somehow i'm sensing a separation between jeremy and his 2 girls soon? The ring seems to convenient to hide from his enemies or infiltrate them.