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Starts slow gets better and continues to improve. Could use addition fleshing out to things. But for webnovel it’s a great book and is entertaining to read the small 2 daily chapters.

It doesn’t explain anything it repeats consistently it doesn’t paint a picture it literally says and he went to this random city it felt like hours how what without sentences this makes as much sense as the writing

Or he gave the elves soul traits, but never told us what they were. Or when an army with tier 3s coming he didn’t inquire how much a soul trait could be sold for

I really wish a few things were different. I like this novel, but it sorely lacks detail. Every arc doesn’ get fleshed out enough. Like when first visiting the origin native city I wish it had a few whole chapters on the atmosphere, markets, shops, people and shopping and trading things. Then a whole arc on the different market oppor tunities that the city and the human world that he can use to gain money and trade deals. The worst part of the novel is the mc’s subjects, every single detail that would build up a relationship or positive image of the lord is missing.. instead it’s all the lord is soo nice (just continually says this in differnt ways, instead of mc doing something that would actually make it true) Him selling his perfectly extracted stuff to only one shop was senseless. I really wish it had a arc about shopping around and making trade deals, instead of just one shop and no negotiation. This gets even worse though with the selling of blueprints, which gets worse again with the “negotiation” that happens for the first time. Honestly though it’s a perfect framework to write an amazing book, but it’s missing the details and context… rather just writes summaries for most things.

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Makes me want more grindy action tension with survive and thrive as the only goals. This one of the very few to foucs on new lIfe lets make the most of it to survive, thrive and enjoy It