Webnovel Author: Porthos10 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

During the nigth due to the sudden attack of the masked man the nine tails was released and lord fourth sacrifisied his life for the village to seal the nine tails .

Nartuo: Reborn In Shimura clan

Anime & Comics · Castiel_8668

Porthos10

2mth

Replied to _Wint3r_

we can leave the story but do not lie, saying that there are no fillers[img=faceslap] it's a slow pace story with 50 chapters that can be gathered in 25 and even some of them have no utility. I thought you were different from patreon author but maybe I was wrong

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Naruto: Subject #37

Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_

Porthos10

4mth

Posted

just read the 2 first arcs, and you'll understand ...even the main characters in the first Disney movies encounters more difficulties. Boruto 5 years old, wants to learn new skills he ask naruto friend and it's done. he learns new skills in one try, flirts with every girl whatever their ages and nobody care about that....if you manage to avoid that in your read, it's not bad written.

A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi

Porthos10

4mth

Commented

....everything is fine with the MC. he gets what he wants freely at the age of 7.am I the only one who see a problem in the story?? even Chinese ff with OP characters are more logical.

ch 17 Chapter 17: The Sage Equal To Heaven

A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi

Porthos10

4mth

Replied to HeWhoWasRevered

just read your paragraph.

Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing.

Naruto:Mr.Origion

Anime & Comics · HeWhoWasRevered

Porthos10

4mth

Commented

read each of yours paragraphs so that you're sure thir sounds good and are understandable.and ADD A SPACE WHEN YOU HAVE A PUNCTUATION

ch 0 2 Nani???

Naruto:Mr.Origion

Anime & Comics · HeWhoWasRevered

Porthos10

4mth

Commented

mistakes

Shisui along with his friend Itachi that he meet on the way to check for daisuke at the small forest,the two we're seen having a conversation about something as they entered the forest they began to split up to cover more ground as 2 minutes later Itachi found Daisuke lying down near a tree seemingly in an unconscious state as he decided to check if his still breathing.