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The ending of this chapter got me cackling. Ren is so oblivious, poor Dan.

I’m so glad this story got such a beautiful ending and everything got resolved. Eli and Lucas are just too cute. But I do feel sorry for Noah though I like to think that Robin and him got back together. Honestly it was such a wonderful story!

I already had such a bad feeling when I started reading this chapter and it just got confirmed. All the hugs for Lucas.

This story is so exciting! Can’t wait how Char will deal with the dragon and what will happen after he gets out :)

Ohhh I loved learning about how the Stratus Empire came to be! Your story is so exciting!

I expected anything but that. To be honest the beginning was promising but it went downhill after a while. In addition to that the writing isn’t the best and has some grammatical errors and such. Hoping the latter chapters will be better (again).

Sorry but I think there’s a part missing betwen {He can hump a wall for all I care} and {War huh?}. It’s really annoying how Webnovel cuts out parts.

Can I just say how much I love the magic system? It’s so exciting to see everyone use their own magic in different ways for different ways! I especially loved how you described the Flameblade Naois not feeling connected to it. This makes me believe that it actually isn’t his signature spell. On the other hand he had just recently awakened to his magic so maybe he just needs to learn more about his magic? I’m just taking guesses here. Lastly, Akio. I’ve only known him since this chapter but I already love him. he might even be(come) my fav chara of this book. His personality is certainly befitting for a kind hero as he does not boast with his power and tries to help, not hurt, others. Though in Naois’s case it was necessarily and I really hope the fight helped him clear his head and set things straight!

The magic system of your story is so cool! I really enjoyed reading about it.

I love how Appollo talked to the men and did his best to convince them to let them through. In my eyes he did a great job!

What an exciting first chapter! I loved how you introduced the characters and their interactions were so enjoyable! Can’t wait to see more of them and just how this story will unravel!