oh okay this time author wrote the word system next to Erie so now I remember that these are the systems of the mom and the children but I don't understand why she can speak to the children's system as well as her own. anyways my earlier comment should have been for author to write the word system next to their names so readers could remember who these names are. I'm not being mean I promise author. I'm just trying to help a little bit. and I'm not perfect obviously for sure not perfect
ch 0 5 The grace of the Archdemon
Fantasy · Hysteria_Hope
I have traveled back to Chapters and I can't find out who Erie and Rika are. I guess it's possible I missed it somewhere
ch 0 5 The grace of the Archdemon
Fantasy · Hysteria_Hope
author has a good start on writing and this is an interesting concept of a story for real. but it needs a lot more practice or maybe they are very young because once again mother and son can suddenly communicate in their brain but no writing was made available for this new skill previous to this. which the add-ons of these different subjects can really flush out a book and add a lot of content I feel like the author will probably be better in the future and I hope they rewrite this book with more information written within it in the future
ch 0 4 Develop relationships
Fantasy · Hysteria_Hope
never mind my bad, I went back and found it I know who Maxim is
ch 0 2 Develop the village
Fantasy · Hysteria_Hope
author who is Maxim?
ch 0 2 Develop the village
Fantasy · Hysteria_Hope
I want Pei Xuan for myself!!!
ch 57 Chapter 56 She's dead?
Fantasy · Qingxuan
where the flag is planted... bwaaa ha haaaa
ch 98 Chapter 097: Stepping Sky (Extra for Alliance Hierarch Philanthropist888)_1
Eastern · Meibu cc
zenis
ch 0 2 Life Stolen
Sci-fi · C_Ryan_H
it's the offspring birthing system
ch 14 Chapter 13: Females Have No Talents
Fantasy · Qingxuan
does anybody remember how many ghosts were released originally? it seems like with as many as Yaya and turtle are killing that they're way above the number originally mentioned. I don't doubt the author at all but it's not my usual book genre and it takes me a lot to absorb so much new information. I'm thinking perhaps right now I'm understanding that they're actually down where all the other ghosts are that aren't released and that's why there's so many more?
ch 96 Chapter 095 Shaving_1
Eastern · Meibu cc
I'm sure it's the translation. and it's so nice when an author writes back so quick and I actually see that a typo happened in my message. so it could be web novel. either way I'm enjoying your book you're doing good
ch 21 Chapter 21
Urban · Lizbella
author uses a lot of infrared adjectives throughout the book. what is your national language author? some of the incorrect words are so far back I wonder how they get translated so badly. but you're writing is good I'm not trying to make this sound terrible
ch 21 Chapter 21
Urban · Lizbella
but what are they wearing???
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 Helping Qin Shen
Rebirth of The Female Devil
Fantasy · DaoistStDV7U