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Finally a transmigration novel where the mc feels like an actual human being! Trully a breath of fresh air. 5stars is not enough imo.

Thanks for the reply,i think ill give the novel another shot. I dropped at first because i saw myself alot in your mc and seeing that even after all she went trough to give herself and her siblings a better life,she seems to get an even worse deal in her second life. I was really bummed out. So if youre telling me it gets better for her ill give it another try.

I like the the general idea of the the novel,but, like other reviews i read i absolutely agree on the fact that the pacing is way too slow.after over 100 chapters the mc should have gone trough a lot more stuff. I mean seriously does it really take 10 chapters for a mc to hitch a ride go to the market sell his stuff and go back home?

The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.

Heres my review so far. If you want to read this book hoping to read about a man who spends his life farming and once in a while has to fight, this isnt it. Whil the mc says his greatest goal is his farm ,author uses only a few lines to describe the farming process, while he uses many chapters to describe fights blow by blow, even though his passion is supposedly farming.all in all, its a good action novel. Its just not a novel about farming.

Great story , i like the characters and the world. One thing that i really hate though is that there are way too many side chapters and different povs.like pretty much 30% of the whole thing.once in a while its alright and at certain times neccessary but this much often kills the immersion for me.